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Monday, March 26, 2007

What Kind of Writer Am I?

I recently began jotting down notes about the books I read. Why? Because I read for pleasure but also to learn the writing craft. If I read something I really enjoy, I want to know what made it enjoyable and whether that element naturally exists in my writing or is something I might strive to incorporate.

For instance, I recently read REDEEMING LOVE by Francine Rivers and WHEN YOU WERE MINE by Adrienne Byrd. Excellent bookends for the type of writing I wish to do. Ms. Rivers book, which is considered a seminal inspirational novel, was raw, riveting, and deeply sensual. Nothing graphic here although the reader certainly understood everything that happened, from prostitution to child abuse. A long novel but very well paced.
The plot never lagged. At the other end, Ms. Byrd's novel was a fast-paced, fun read. Sexy and laugh-out-loud funny. Could easily lay the groundwork for a series. (In fact, it turns out to be Book 2.) Like most category romance, there was the obligatory sex scene, decidedly more graphic than Ms. Rivers' book, but honest and with comedic flair.

I thought about my writing. How do I want my writing, my body of work (when I have one) to be described?

1 -- Inspirational category romance with multicultural characters.
I just don't see enough of these

2 -- Short contemporary romance that is light, fast-paced, and fun.

3 -- Longer contemporaries that delve deeply into relationship and inspirational issues.
I want readers to be touched and maybe to consider the Gospel in a way that they previously haven't. Pace will still be important.

4 -- Romance that is more sensual than graphic.
I really enjoy romance that leaves much to the imagination while yet juicy enough to stir things up.

I'll need to pay attention to pacing, infusing humor, and learning to write emotion-based love scenes. And of course learn how to say all this in a catch phrase I can sell to an agent and a few publishers.

When you think about it, what kind of writer are you? How do you describe your writing?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, March 21, 2007

What Makes a Man Fall in Love?

I ran across an interesting article on Yahoo this morning. It's about the things that make a man fall in love with a woman. And falling in love is the business of romance authors. Without it, how would we ever achieve the HEA (Happily Ever After)?

Romance = women. Women readers and women writers. Sure, there are a few guys who admit to loving, even writing, romance--maybe more than we realize--but generally the romance market is all about women.

Yet, it's important for we women writers of romance to understand something about what romance means to guys. I mean, if our stories are to be credible, shouldn't we take a bit of time to understand the male psyche? (Yes, I know it takes a lifetime of effort but how about trying for a few moments?)

According to Men's Health magazine, there are four things that cause a guy to fall in love. They are:
1 -- A woman with a passion in something other than him
2 -- A woman with no problem with guy time
3 -- A woman with a strut
4 -- A woman with good taste in ties (actually, a woman who provides gentle guidance)

Let's see. Guys fall in love when they encounter a confident woman with a life of her own, who can advise him without bruising his ego. I like that. Gives me hope for the other half of the species, while reminding women need to be sensitive to men's feelings too.

The survey says that men rated sex as the most important thing in a relationship only 8% of the time (I'll buy that if they rated it in the top 3 at least 75% of the time) but I'm assuming this confident woman must also be attractive, at least to the guy in question.

What do you think causes men to fall in love? What worked for your favorite hero? You'll find the full text of the article here.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, March 19, 2007

2007 Romance Slam Jam Awards

The Romance Slam Jam, created in 1995 by Emma Rodgers, Ashira Tosihwe and Francis Ray, grew out of a desire to celebrate African-American romance. Since I love AA romance and plan to write AA Christian romance, I'm interested.

This year's event was held this past weekend in Miami. (So near and yet so far...from my pocketbook!) Gwyneth Bolton, a relatively new but already prolific, African-American romance author was the big winner this year.

(Disclaimer: Gwyn's been a commenter on this blog and is a Delta Sigma Theta sorority sister of mine but folks who know me know I call 'em as I see 'em. Nonetheless, I figured I should tell you upfront because I'm getting ready to lead the cheering section.)

Gwyneth won Favorite New Author for I'M GONNA MAKE YOU LOVE ME. Her hero, Darren Whitman, was named Favorite Hero and her heroine, Alicia Taylor, was named Favorite Heroine.

I had the pleasure of reading Gwyneth's winning work this past weekend, probably closing in on that last chapter at the same time she was walking on stage to accept her award! Her recognition is much deserved because Gwyneth writes romance with a hip-hop flavor without writing down to her audience. Smart, contemporary romance with endearing characters. I enjoyed this book and look forward to reading her current releases.

I'm really excited--can you tell???--because Gwyneth is a big encourager of aspiring authors. Her comments here have encouraged me and I consider her a cyberfriend. She's a PhD professor but she's also down-to-earth and quite funny. (Okay, enough about Gwyneth, before folks think she paid for advertising.)

One of my favorites, author Francis Ray, was named Favorite Author. Jaquelin Thomas won in my future category, Favorite Inspirational, for her novel DEFINING MOMENTS.

For a full list of winners and a few conference notes, check out Gwyneth's blog.

Congratulations to all the nominees and winners. I hope to see you all in Chicago in 2008. For more information on next year's event, sign up for the Yahoo group that host author, Deatri King-Bey, has just started.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, March 12, 2007

A Cure for Writer's Block

If you've been reading my posts, you know I haven't done any serious writing in...wow...almost four months! Family stuff, the holidays, pretty much you name it, and I've been unfocused and unable to sit down and write.

Not a good place to be if you're a writer.

Well, this weekend, I decided to do something about it. I figured I would use my time, since I wasn't actually putting words on paper, to learn more about the craft of writing. Took a couple of books out of the library. Then, had to push myself a bit to start reading one, rather than start another delicious novel.

In the first chapter, I had to re-read every sentence, two or three times, in order to move from paragraph to paragraph. My brain was resisting, resisting, resisting! The weather was gorgeous (Central FL, sunny and 85 degrees), and I had no scheduled activities, a rare occasion in my household. I guess I wanted to relax mentally as well as physically.

But I stuck with it, and eventually got into it. And you know what I discovered? One cure for writer's block is to read about writing.

Writer's block, in my experience, comes when I'm not feeling good about what I've got down already, maybe because the plot seems to be going nowhere (or at least not where I want it to), my premise is not strong enough to sustain 240-300 pages, my characters' motivations are unclear so I have no idea what they might do next (and they're waiting on me!), etc. Maybe I feel like starting anew but don't really have any new ideas or I simply need overall motivation, which takes me back to the first point. What I have so far, if anything, probably isn't very good so I'm really just procrastinating because I don't know how to fix it.

The book I read this weekend was from the Elements of Fiction Writing series published by Writer's Digest. SCENE & STRUCTURE by Jack Bickham was eye-opening, enlightening,...dare I say, energizing?!

(Remember that I'm a newbie so this is old-hat to you, bear with me.)

I forgot my work-in-progress and focused on the material. I finally learned what the difference is between a scene and a sequel, something no one seemed to be able to explain to my understanding. I learned the classic structure of each, then ways to break the classic structure for dramatic effect. I learned how to link them in order to build a plot. I learned about common errors made by writers, especially newbies like myself. Most of all, about halfway through the book, I realized that I now knew how to fix what ails my work-in-progress.

Ya-hoooooo!!!

I took notes. LOTS of notes and I've placed this book on my purchase list. I'm finishing up the last few chapters. Next, I'll look at my wip in light of what I've learned. I plan to identify and outline all of my scenes and sequels, then figure out what works and what doesn't. Then, I plan to use the scene/sequel construct to help me finish plotting the novel, which is where I got stuck. Some of the scenes didn't work for me, and I worried about credibility, which put me in constant re-write mode. I also found my story veering off in strange directions because I was writing the first scene ending that came to mind, rather than picking the best one to move my story toward its desired conclusion.

So, if you're stuck, and (1) taking a leisurely diversion was nice but didn't make a difference, (2) plowing through only takes you farther into literary darkness, or (3) you don't know what advice to take and what to leave from your critique group, well-meaning family, or the poor stranger who had the misfortune of sitting next to you on the bus while stuck in traffic during the afternoon commute, consider grabbing a book on writing and plunging headfirst into learning more craft.

I don't have a long list of recommendations, because I haven't read that many, but you can easily find them. A great place to look is on the websites of your favorite authors. Who better to ask?

This cure will not only take your mind off your wip but ideally, you will pick up some tools and techniques that address the issues with your wip or serve to rejuvenate your creative juices.

It worked for me.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Friday, March 09, 2007

February 2007 Goal Check-in

Yes, I know it's March but I just realized I didn't "check-in" to see how I was progressing against my goals at the end of last month. (That whole short month thing always messes with me.)

Here's how I'm doing:
1. Finish and submit a novel manuscript -- If I was marking time last month, this month I went backward. Got some personal stuff going on that makes computer time outside of work pretty much non-existant. So I haven't written anything. Actually, that's not accurate. (See goal #3) I did begin a new synopsis the other day. novel. I think that I was trying too hard to make the story I started last fall work, and by doing so, I was losing interest and defeating my purpose. I plan to go back to it but for now, I'm starting something new, something that I think I can make work.

2. Attend a writing conference -- Still hopeful but not going to make myself crazy. If I publish my WW story (see below), that will pay for a writing conference.

3. Publish 2 short stories per quarter -- I took an online class last month on writing for Woman's World, a hard short story market to crack. So I wrote and submitted a story. I also started two others. Tough market but pay is good: $1,000 per 1,000 word story. Sending up prayers...

4. Meet & network with writers -- I continue to meet great writer-friends online. This month I met a woman who also writes inspirational, multicultural romance (that's a mouthful!) My blog readership is also up a bit. However slight, that's something.

5. Join a professional organization --- COMPLETE

6. Learn more about marketing & promotion -- No progress but I expect to focus more on this in the 2nd half of the year, after I complete my manuscript.

Did you set writing goals for 2007? How are you doing? I'd love to hear.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Thursday, March 01, 2007

Book Review -- So Dark The Night by Margaret Daley

Not too long ago, Margaret Daley, Christian romance author, offered copies of her upcoming release, SO DARK THE NIGHT. The conditions? Write a book review if I liked it.

My pleasure. (Note: It's too early for me to post it on Amazon and I don't like B&N's limitations, so I'll post it here.)

Margaret Daley's SO DARK THE NIGHT Emma St. James has led a charmed life. The daughter of one of America's most glamourous movie stars and a highly successful, albeit ruthless, businessman, she is an acclaimed photographer in her own right.

Colin Fitzpatrick, Gulf War veteran and pastor of a small town church, is content with life in Crystal Springs. A widower, he is raising twin teenage daughters with help from his aunt.

When Emma and Colin's worlds collide--literally, as Colin hits Emma with his car while driving home from a youth conference as she tries to escape her brother's murderers--they form an alliance and both begin to question the tenets of their individual lives that they've taken for granted. Will Emma's unbelief be too much of an obstacle for their budding relationship to overcome? Will Colin help Emma solve the myster of her brother's murder before the killers find her? Will Emma regain her sight?

Margaret Daley has penned a suspense to make one's heart flutter. Every time things seem to settle down, and the focus shifts to the growing romance between Emma and Colin, a new twist in the murder mystery emerges.

Emma is a likeable heroine but Colin Fitzpatrick is a hero's hero. A former army office, Colin is strong of body, impossible to intimidate, and competent with a firearm. Yet, he's also tender of heart and strong in his faith, beloved by his congregation and attuned to every one of Emma's emotional or physical needs. What I liked most about him was that he is not perfect--although darn close--but he's at peace with his imperfections.

To her credit, Ms. Daley made Emma's faith journey very believable. I enjoy a story where even when the character realizes her need for God, the conversion is not so immediate but more of a process.

SO DARK THE NIGHT satisfies on all fronts. Lovers of romantic suspense will enjoy this intriguing who-dunnit, as will fans of inspirational romance. I look forward to the next Love Inspired Suspense story from Ms. Daley, the story of J.T. and Madison, the two police officers introduced in this tale.

SO DARK THE NIGHT, available March 2007. Pre-order now or mark your calendar to pick a copy!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.