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Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Teaser Tuesdays -- Forbidden Falls by Robyn Carr

"Nah, God's not opposed to kissing.  I think employers taking advantage of employees, however, could put a big black mark on the minus side of my chart." -- page 199, Forbidden Falls by Robyn Carr (Book 8 in the Virgin River series)


Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along! Just do the following:
  • Grab your current read
  • Open to a random page
  • Share two (2) “teaser” sentences from somewhere on that page (in the comments or via link to your own blog)
  • BE CAREFUL NOT TO INCLUDE SPOILERS! (make sure that what you share doesn’t give too much away! You don’t want to ruin the book for others!)
  • Share the title and author, too, so that other TT participants can add the book to their TBR Lists if they like your teasers!

Reading anything interesting?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Featured Book: In the Midst of It All by Tiffany L. Warren

It is time for a FIRST Wild Card Tour book review! If you wish to join the FIRST blog alliance, just click the button. We are a group of reviewers who tour Christian books.  A Wild Card post includes a brief bio of the author and a full chapter from each book toured.  The reason it is called a FIRST Wild Card Tour is that you never know if the book will be fiction, non~fiction, for young, or for old...or for somewhere in between!  Enjoy your free peek into the book!

You never know when I might play a wild card on you!


Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:

Grand Central Publishing; 1 edition (February 22, 2010)
***Special thanks to Miriam Parker - Associate Director, Online Marketing - at Hachette Book Group for sending me a review copy.***

ABOUT THE AUTHOR:


Tiffany L. Warren, is an author, playwright, songwriter, mother and wife. Her debut novel What a Sista Should Do, was released in June of 2005 and has ministered to over 50,000 readers. Her second book, Farther than I Meant to Go, Longer than I Meant to Stay was a national bestseller. In 2006, Tiffany and her husband, Brent, founded Warren Productions and released their first gospel musical. What a Sista Should Do - The Stage Play debuted in Cleveland, OH at the famed Allen Theatre.

Tiffany is also the visionary behind the Faith and Fiction Fellowship tour. Presently, the authors have visited groups in Atlanta, Houston, New York, Baltimore, Washington D.C. and Charlotte.

Tiffany's third novel, The Bishop's Daughter was released in January 2009. Tiffany resides in northern Texas with her husband Brent and their five children.

Visit the author's website.

Product Details:

List Price: $13.99
Paperback: 320 pages
Publisher: Grand Central Publishing; 1 edition (February 22, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0446195162
ISBN-13: 978-0446195164


REVIEW:

There are few authors who can take on the taboo topics of Christianity and handle them with aplomb. Tiffany L. Warren is one of those authors.

In her latest novel, In the Midst of It All, Ms. Warren tackles mental illness and cults, both touchy subjects, particularly in the evangelical world.

Teenager Zenovia Sinclair and her mother Audrey largely keep to themselves, in part due to Audrey's mental illness and because they both see visions. Not everyone understands these things. But when a woman going door-to-door extends an invitation to Audrey for them to attend the Brethren of the Sacrifice Devotion Center from a lady going door-to-door, their lives change forever.

Zenovia is not new to God but neither is she grounded in her faith.  Immediately she questions the style and some of the teachings and practices of the Brethren, as the congregation fondly refers to itself. But Zenovia goes along in order to keep the peace with Audrey, something she's done for years in response to Audrey's illness. Although she doesn't agree with everything, Zenovia's willing to overlook her concerns because, among the teens of the Brethren, she finds her first real friends, even if they are a judgmental, suspicious bunch.

As the story unwinds, Zenovia's friendships and faith unravel. Years later, she again steps toward God, ultimately finding her calling in Him, but not before untold damage is done. 

Without a preachy bone in her body, Tiffany Warren exposes the dangers for anyone of allowing others to interpret Scripture for them or define their relationship with Him. By leaving out a crucial verse or twisting one's meaning just a little, it's quite possible to change the Word into something it was never intended to be. By seeking mercy and grace from men, rather than God, In The Midst of It All spotlights how it's possible for personal growth to be stunted and lives to be ruined.  Even with that heavy mantle, it manages to end on a upbeat, making it a very pleasurable read.

I devoured this book in a single day, yet I wouldn't call it a fast-paced book. It's just a completely riveting story. Never coming up against a slow or dead spot in the action, I turned page after page until there were no more. Although the ending was satisfying, I felt the slight letdown readers occasionally experience simply because the story ended.

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:

To read the chapter, press the the button that says, "Browse Inside This Book":




One more thing...

Tiffany is the founder and host of the annual Faith & Fiction retreat, to be held this year in Atlanta, GA, June 18-19th.  Tiffany is a wonderful host, providing warm hospitality and lots of jokes.  She's also serious about bringing authors and readers together, and about helping the writers in attendance improve their craft.  If you haven't had a chance to attend one before, consider attending this year's retreat.  I had the best time in Destin, FL a few years back, and I'm hoping to make my way to Atlanta in June.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, March 29, 2010

A New Week, A New Look

How do you like my blog's new look?

My blogger template went south a couple of months ago.  Not sure why but every time I looked at it, it made me nauseous.

After all, who doesn't want their blog to be pretty, cool, well-laid out, current, etc?

So when I saw an invite to try the new Blogger Template Designer, I figured it was worth a shot.  Much better than considering the time it was going to take me to comb through the HTML looking  for the problem.

I think the BTD is in beta only and may not yet be available to all Blogger users. But it's simple to use, and when it's rolled out to all users, I think it will be a big hit.

Now, I've just got to play with the layout of the two columns on the right.  It was time to update them anyway so I'll take care of that over the next few days.

Aren't rainy Mondays fun?  smile

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, March 27, 2010

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- March 27, 2010

Lest you thought things were quieting down on the ereading front...  iPad is expected to transform ereading from a device-specific activity, and Amazon is still bullying publishers.

More fallout from the ebook wars -- Ingram announces that it may not be able to sell ebooks to retailers (unless they are published by Random House, who does not have an iPad agreement in the works).

And, publishers' Kindle policies are still making problems for authors who are getting low reviews on Amazon for no reason other than their book isn't available in the Kindle format.  (Like, how silly are these readers?  Availability in a particular format has nothing to do with the quality of the book.  But maybe it's me...)  Anyway, Paul Carr at TechCrunch thinks Amazon should rethink it's review policies.

But on the writing front...

Plot consultant Martha Alderson will be conducting a 4-day Writer's Retreat with a Focus on Plot and Structure this June in the Santa Cruz mountains.  Go here for more information.

Spring is in the air, and agent Scott Eagan says that means you have a second chance to set some goals.

Lack confidence in your writing?  Perhaps you suffer from Dunning-Kruger effect.   (I'm feeling better already...)


If you want faith-filled inspiration from a multi-published author who is very transparent about her own writing struggles, look no further than Patti Lacy's blog.  (And while you're at it, read her most recent release, What the Bayou Sae.  Fabulous book.)

The 2010 RITA Finalists have been announced.  Winners will be announced on July 31st at this year's Romance Writers of America conference in Nashville, TN.

Free Expressions is accepting scholarship applications for the September 13-19  "Writing the Breakout Novel Weeklong Intensive" taught by literary agent, Donald Maass, to be held in Charlotte, NC.

Savvy Authors offers a slew of online writing courses, some as low as $5. Check them out here.

It's warming up here in FL, as I hope it's beginning to do for the rest of the country (although I'm quite sure I heard something about snow somewhere this week).  Find a way to get "out and about" this weekend, if only to walk around the block and maybe meet a new neighbor.  While you're at it, share a good book!

Enjoy the weekend!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Teaser Tuesdays -- Imaginary Jesus

Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along! Just do the following:
  • Grab your current read
  • Open to a random page
  • Share two (2) “teaser” sentences from somewhere on that page (in the comments or via link to your own blog)
  • BE CAREFUL NOT TO INCLUDE SPOILERS! (make sure that what you share doesn’t give too much away! You don’t want to ruin the book for others!)
  • Share the title and author, too, so that other TT participants can add the book to their TBR Lists if they like your teasers!
"Magic 8 Ball Jesus. A lot more common than you would think. People pray to Jesus and then wait to see what answer they'll get." -- page 60, Imaginary Jesus by Matt Mikalatos

Reading anything interesting?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, March 20, 2010

Featured Book & Book Giveaway: A Case for Love by Kaye Dacus

Today's feature is the third story in the Brides of Bonneterre series, from Barbour Publishing and author Kaye Dacus. And I have an extra copy to giveaway to one fortunate commenter!

It is time for a FIRST Wild Card Tour book review! If you wish to join the FIRST blog alliance, just click the button. We are a group of reviewers who tour Christian books. A Wild Card post includes a brief bio of the author and a full chapter from each book toured. The reason it is called a FIRST Wild Card Tour is that you never know if the book will be fiction, non~fiction, for young, or for old...or for somewhere in between! Enjoy your free peek into the book!

You never know when I might play a wild card on you!


Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:


A Case for Love

Barbour Books (February 1, 2010)

***Special thanks to Angie Brillhart, Publicist, of Barbour Publishing for sending me a review copy.***

ABOUT THE AUTHOR:



Author Kaye Dacus enjoyed her visits to a local television station while researching this book. She likes to say she writes “inspirational romance with a sense of humor.” She lives in Nashville and graduated from Seton Hill University’s Master of Arts in Writing Popular Fiction program. She is an active member and former Vice President of American Christian Fiction Writers (ACFW).

Visit the author's website.

Product Details:

List Price: $10.97
Paperback: 320 pages
Publisher: Barbour Books (February 1, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 1602604568
ISBN-13: 978-1602604568

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:


“You did what?”

Forbes Guidry sank into the tall-backed leather chair, extremities numb, and stared at the couple sitting across the desk from him. As a partner in the largest law firm in Bonneterre, Louisiana, he’d heard a lot of shocking things over the fourteen years he’d been practicing. But nothing had hit him quite like this.

“We eloped.” His sister held up her left hand where a diamond wedding band had been added below the antique engagement ring she’d sported for the past three months. “I know you were looking forward to being Major’s best man, which is why we’re telling you before breaking it to the rest of the family.”

He hardly spared a glance at his best friend—now his brother-in-law—before pinning his gaze on his sister. “Meredith, this is a joke, right? What about the meeting Monday with Anne—the plans we discussed?” Sure, Meredith had been a little too quiet during that meeting, had voiced concerns about how big the wedding seemed to be growing, but she’d been coming off working a huge event that weekend and had been tired. . .hadn’t she?

“Things were getting out of hand—had already gone too far.”

“Stop.” Forbes fought the urge to press his hands over his ears. “Way too much information.”

Major chuckled; Meredith frowned at both of them. “Oh, for mercy’s sake. I’m talking about the wedding plans. Neither of us wanted a big wedding, but every time we met with Anne—or you, or anyone in the family—it grew exponentially. Especially once Mom and Dad stuck their oars in and started making lists of all of their business acquaintances that needed to be invited.”

Forbes stared at his sister, dumbfounded. He prided himself on knowing exactly what each member of his family was thinking before they ever thought it. How had this blindsided him so completely?

He finally turned his attention on Major. “When you came in Tuesday to talk about the restaurant, did you already have this planned?”

“No. Not planned. We’d discussed it, but it wasn’t until that night when we made the decision.” Major had the good grace to look abashed.

And you didn’t call me? Forbes reined in the childish words with a tight fist of control. He faced his sister again. “When and where did you get married?”

“Yesterday, when Mom and Dad met us at Beausoleil Pointe Center for lunch with Major’s mom. We’d asked the chaplain to perform the ceremony, and we got married in the pavilion where Major proposed to me.”

Forbes turned away from the dewy-eyed look Meredith gave her new husband, feeling ill. That would explain why Meredith hadn’t shown up for dinner with the siblings and cousins last night. He’d just assumed she was working overtime preparing for an event this weekend.

When the silence stretched, Forbes looked at them again.

Meredith’s eyes narrowed speculatively at Forbes. “Major, would you mind if I had a private word with my brother?”

“Sure. No problem.” Major stood, smoothing the front of his chinos. “I–I’ll wait for you out in the car.”

“Thanks.” Meredith never pulled her gaze away from Forbes—giving him the look that had always been able to make him squirm.

Forbes watched his friend leave the office, then pressed his lips together and faced his sister again.

“What is it that bothers you most? That you aren’t going to be best man, that you don’t get to be involved and have a say in the wedding plans, or that you didn’t see this coming?” Meredith crossed her legs and clasped her hands around her knee, her expression betraying smugness and amusement.

What bothered him most was that over the past six or eight months, Meredith had slowly been pulling away from the family. Ever since she’d bought that house against his—and their parents’—advice, she’d started keeping secrets, spending less time with them. As the oldest, it was his responsibility to keep his six brothers and sisters in line, to watch out for and protect them, and to guide them in making their decisions. Mom and Dad had laid that burden on him early in life, and he’d gladly carried it. But how could he express that to Meredith without coming across sounding like a little boy who hadn’t gotten his way?

“I’m not bothered, just surprised. You’re the last person in the family I’d expect to do something without planning it out well in advance.” He gave her his most charming grin. “It is what you do for a living, after all.”

She responded with a half smile. “And thus the reason for eloping. Between the busiest event-load we’ve ever had, the Warehouse Row project, and Major getting ready for the groundbreaking on the restaurant, we were just tired of schedules and checklists and menus and seating charts. Now Marci won’t feel like her wedding is being overshadowed by her oldest sister’s, since she decided to plan a Christmas wedding and we didn’t want to wait that long.”

He could see her point, but. . . “Don’t you feel like you’ve cheated yourself out of the wedding you always wanted? Growing up, you and Anne used to talk about your dream weddings.”

Meredith shrugged. “Anne always had the ideas. I guess that’s why she’s been such a great success as a wedding planner—every week she had bigger and grander ideas. Whenever I really thought about it, I couldn’t imagine myself in the big dress, my hair all done up, standing there in front of that many people. I guess I never dreamed about a wedding—I just dreamed about falling in love and being married.”

Come to think about it, Forbes couldn’t picture his jeans–and–T-shirt sister in a fluffy white gown, either. He ran his finger along the edge of the desk blotter.

“And look at the bright side: Now you don’t have to find a date for the wedding.”

He released a derisive sound in the back of his throat. “Yes, since that worked out so well at Anne’s wedding—for my date, anyway.”

“How do you always manage to find these women who’re just trying to make their boyfriends jealous?”

He shrugged.

“You know, I know someone I think would be perfect for you, if you’d like me to see if she’d be agreeable to being set up on a blind date with you.”

His insides quivered at the idea. “Thank you kindly, but I’ll have to pass and just leave it up to chance. As I told George Laurence a long time ago, when God’s ready for me to fall in love, He’ll throw the right woman into my path.”

“Uh, did you think that maybe your sisters’ and cousins’ attempts to set you up on dates might be God’s way of throwing the right woman in your path?”

“Not unless He’s shared something with you He hasn’t told me.” Forbes rounded the desk and held out his hand to his sister. She rose, and he pulled her into a hug. “Congratulations, Sis. I’m confident that you and Major will be happier together than you can even imagine.”

“I know we will be.”

“I’ll walk you out.”

Halfway down the stairs, he paused. “What about a honeymoon? Don’t tell me you’re going to just drop everything and take a two-week vacation that hasn’t been on the schedule for the past six months.”

“No. Since the events next week can be handled by our assistants, we’re leaving next Wednesday for a long weekend in Colorado. Amazing how this managed to coincide with the Aspen Food and Wine Classic that Major’s always wanted to go to, huh?” But from the smile on her face, he could tell she didn’t begrudge indulging Major’s wishes in the least.

Heading back to his office after seeing his sister and brother-in-law off—would he ever get used to that?—Forbes feigned harriedness to keep anyone from trying to stop him for a chat.

“Samantha, no calls for the next half hour, please,” he told his secretary on his way past her desk.

“Yes, Mr. Guidry.”

He leaned against his door after closing it. His office, with its walls of built-in, dark wood cabinets and bookcases, seemed to press in around him.

What he’d told Meredith was true; he was absolutely certain that she and Major would have a happy marriage. Both of them were easygoing, almost too eager to give up what they wanted to make someone else happy. Forbes had learned a long time ago that he didn’t have the right personality to get married. Every girl he’d dated in high school or college had wanted to go out with him because of his looks. And every one of them had eventually broken up with him for one of two reasons: Either she thought he was selfish and didn’t pay enough attention to her, or she thought he was too controlling and tried to smother her.

He’d completely given up on dating after his ten-year high school class reunion, at which he’d overheard two of his ex-girlfriends having a laugh about how it was no surprise to them that he wasn’t married yet.

He crossed to the window behind his desk and leaned against the frame, staring down at the visitor parking lot. His twenty-year reunion was coming up in the fall. And while he’d love to find some ravishing beauty to take to it to shut up all those exes, he didn’t want the hassle of expectations that came from taking someone out on a date.

When the thirty minutes he’d given himself to brood expired, he opened the office door and asked Samantha to come in to review his schedule for the remainder of the day.

He made several notes in his PDA while she reviewed the afternoon’s appointments and meetings. When she finished and closed her planner, she hesitated, biting her lips.

“What is it?” He leaned back in his chair, curious. She’d never acted in the least intimidated or scared of him before. She’d worked for him a little less than a year, but she was the first secretary he’d had who didn’t seem to mind a boss others had called a micromanager—had even stood up to him a time or two.

“Someone from Bonneterre Lifestyles called a little while ago. It seems you didn’t RSVP for the dinner tonight.”

Forbes groaned. Ever since he’d assisted in partner Tess Folse’s run for city council five years ago—during which he’d given many speeches, appeared on all the local channels’ news broadcasts, and had his photo in the paper multiple times—he’d been a fixture on the magazine’s beefcake list, having garnered enough votes to win and get his face on the front cover twice.

“I suppose it’s black tie?”

Samantha nodded. “That’s what the gal said.”

“Seven o’clock?”

“They offered a car—a limo—for you, if you want.”

He pressed his thumb and forefinger to the bridge of his nose. The three other partners—all women—were thrilled every year when he told them of his inclusion on the list. The articles enumerating his accomplishments were good exposure for the firm, they’d say. Up until now, he’d found some excuse or another to avoid the dinner. This year, Tess, Sandra, and Esther had strongly suggested he make an appearance at the magazine’s big publicity event at which the magazine’s cover would be revealed and the top five bachelors named and recognized with awards.

He glanced over Samantha’s head at the three plaques and two glass trophies on a display shelf. Maybe they needed to give him a new award—Bonneterre’s Most Perpetual Bachelor. He hoped this year he wasn’t again the oldest man on the list.

“Call them back and tell them I’d be delighted to attend, but I’ll drive myself.”

“Will do, boss.” Samantha scooped up her planner and the folders Forbes had given her to refile, and crossed to the door. “And Mr. Guidry?”

“Yes, Samantha?”

“Do try to have fun tonight, okay?”

“Uh-huh. As fun as jumping into a pool full of thumbtacks.”

Samantha’s laughter followed her out of the room.

His gaze flickered back to the emblems of his perpetual singleness. He’d heard the magazine always invited the year’s Most Eligible Bachelorettes to the dinner—possibly hoping to set up a relationship and eventual wedding they could report in their pages. Maybe he could find someone there to take to the reunion—so long as she understood there were no strings attached.

[insert line space]

Alaine Delacroix scrubbed off her on-air makeup. “Matt, have you seen Pricilla since I went off air? I need to talk to her about the event tonight.”

The intern frowned. “I thought you were a guest at the thing, not covering it.”

“Who else is going to cover something like that other than me? I’m the only reporter at this station who covers the social scene.” Not that she wanted to anymore. But until the news director actually looked at the hard-news pieces she’d been doing on her own time, she’d be stuck covering the fluff stories as she had for the past decade of her life.

“If I see her, I’ll tell her you need to talk to her.” The college student waved and left the small prep room.

Alaine turned to check her appearance in the large mirror to make sure she didn’t have mascara smeared down her cheeks. She made the inspection as quick as possible, hating to see her own reflection with no makeup. Even with her shoulder-length black hair still styled from her noon broadcast, with no makeup on, all she saw in the mirror were flaws—dark circles under her eyes, freckles scattered across her nose and cheeks, and the bumps on her forehead that never seemed to go away.

She applied concealer under her eyes, powder all over her face, and a touch of eye makeup, blush, and lip gloss before returning to her desk in the newsroom. Once upon a time, Alaine Delacroix would have thought nothing of walking around with no makeup on. But that had been a very long time ago; she’d been a different person then.

An envelope with the station’s logo and return address in the top left corner sat on her chair when she got back to her cubicle, bearing her name in handwriting she didn’t recognize. She opened it—and smiled. She’d hoped the marketing director would be able to come through for her.

She picked up her phone and dialed a number from memory.

“Boudreaux-Guidry Enterprises, Events and Facilities, this is Meredith.”

“Hey, girl. It’s Alaine.”

“Oh—hi.” Meredith sounded funny. “What’s up?”

Alaine laughed. “I can’t believe you’re going to pretend you don’t know why I’m calling you.”

“You—how did you find out?”

All traces of amusement evaporated, her reporter’s instincts kicking in. Meredith sounded like someone who had a secret. “You know a journalist can’t reveal her sources. So? Spill it. I want details.”

“I haven’t told most of my family yet. If I give you details, you have to promise you won’t say anything to anyone until after Sunday. We’re telling the family at dinner after church.”

“Strictly off the record.” Alaine picked up a pen and steno pad, but forced herself to put them down again and rotate in her chair so that her back was to the desk.

“We had the chaplain at Beausoleil Pointe Center marry us yesterday afternoon. We surprised our parents.”

All the air in Alaine’s lungs froze solid. Meredith Guidry and Major O’Hara had eloped? “But I thought you were having your cousin Anne plan a big wedding for you. I was hoping to cover it, since Major has become quite the celebrity, what with his cooking segments on my show.”

“We decided we were just too busy to try to plan a big wedding. And we’ve already wasted eight years. Why put it off any longer?”

A flash-fire of jealousy forced the air out of Alaine’s lungs. Meredith had been one of her few friends who was still unmarried—and the only true friend Alaine had had in years. She hated being single; even more than becoming a serious journalist, getting married was the one thing she wanted most in life. Yet at thirty-two years old, she was starting to worry that the chances of either dream coming true were not just slipping, but sprinting, away.

Alaine had to swallow past the huge lump in her throat to make her voice work. “Congratulations, Mere. I’m really happy for you.” She glanced down at the envelope crumpled in her fist. “Oh, I got the passes for the Art without Limits exhibit preview and fundraiser at the Beausoleil Fine Arts Center, if you’re still interested in going.”

“Of course I am. And since Major’s catering it, I won’t have to feel guilty about going off and leaving him home alone. Thanks again for thinking of me.”

“I don’t know anyone else who likes art, and I hate going to those things by myself.” She twisted the spiral cord around her finger tightly, trying to see if the slight pain would help squeeze out her envy.

“Same here—oh, my other line just lit up. I’ll talk to you later.”

“Okay. Bye.” Alaine turned around to hang up the receiver, then put her head down on her folded arms atop the desk. God, why is everyone I know married or engaged? Am I the last old maid left in Bonneterre?

She knew the answer to that, of course. Twenty-four other “eligible bachelorettes” would be at the Bonneterre Lifestyles dinner along with her, if they all showed up. And who wouldn’t, when they’d have VIP access to the handsomest, wealthiest, highest-profile single men in town for the evening?

Mother’s constant harping on her to get married—and soon—was starting to make Alaine feel like something was wrong with her for still being single at her age. The facts that Joe and his wife couldn’t have kids and that Tony, at age twenty-six, wasn’t anywhere near ready to settle down put all the pressure of producing grandchildren anytime soon on Alaine. And she wasn’t even sure she wanted kids.

She sat up and tried to run her fingers through her hair—before remembering it was still shellacked with hair spray.

Maybe tonight she’d give those bachelors more than just a professional glance. Maybe it was time to get a little arm candy to show her parents—and anyone else who might be looking—that she was at least trying. And she never knew: Mr. Right could be Bachelor Number One, Two, or Twenty-Five.



REVIEW:

Another smart, fun romance from author Kaye Dacus, A Case for Love features the unrepentant bachelor, Forbes Guidry. Except bachelorhood is no longer all it once was.

One of the things I enjoy about the Brides of Bonneterre series are the families -- the extended Guidry family and now the Delacroix family. Very different families and yet sharing one important detail, a strong and abiding love for each and every member, even when there is disagreement.

The thing I enjoy most, however, is the place. Boy, I wish Bonneterre were a real place because it sounds like a wonderful place, a place I'd love to visit. Kaye Dacus did an astounding job of creating this locale and imbuing it with all the little details that make any town amazing, from the small businesses to the Town Square to the formerly vibrant Moreaux Mills area now in need of revitalization along with a cast of characters that seem as real as the setting. I especially love that Bonneterre is a place with people of varied ethnicity and that one and all are presented in a equally warm and respectful light.

I enjoyed Stand-In Groom, only to enjoy Menu for Romance more, but now that I've read A Case for Love, it is definitely my favorite of the series.

Don't forget to comment for a chance to win a copy of A Case for Love.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Friday, March 19, 2010

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- March 19, 2010

I usually post my tidbits on Saturdays, but this weekend, I've got a book feature (and giveaway) for Kaye Dacus's latest release, A Case for Love. So I thought we'd "tidbit" today.

How about we start with some major feel-good inspiration? Nothing better than the "call" story of Eugenia Lovett West, an eighty-something aspiring writer plucked from the slush pile by a St. Martins editor. Part one of her interview with Writer Unboxed is here; part two, here.

ForeWords has announced the finalists for its Book of the Year Awards, recognizing "distinctive books from independent publishers across a number of genres". Seems like every genre imaginable, but I found some interesting reads I plan to follow-up on. Take a peek.

With the departure of Harper Studio's Bob Miller, some are saying their experiment (find a link to more info on that here) has failed. But they're not down for the count yet, and they're willing to answer any questions you might have about where they are and what's next.

Romantic suspense author Rebecca York shares her writing process as she contemplates the "Habits of the Productive Writer".

Along the same lines but even broader, is the "101 Habits of Highly Effective Writers". This one categorizes the habits into topics like routine, process, style, inspiration, improving your craft, business, and also offers words of wisdom from famous writers.

Ever been told you have a tendency to overwrite? (I have.) Here's how you can spot overwriting in your writing.

Writers Digest editor Jane Friedman talks about "the biggest bad advice for story openings", with which I totally agree, but the real gem is the link in the article to the story opening tips that she tweeted. (After clicking on the link, you'll have to scroll about midway to see them.) If you're still unsure, read this follow-up that explains what is meaningful, significant action.

This is the coolest video on "The End of Publishing". You have to watch it all the way through, though. Check it out.


Enjoy the weekend. Don't forget to come back tomorrow and comment for a chance to win A Case for Love by Kaye Dacus!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Featured Book: The Right Call by Kathy Herman

It is time for a FIRST Wild Card Tour book review! If you wish to join the FIRST blog alliance, just click the button. We are a group of reviewers who tour Christian books. A Wild Card post includes a brief bio of the author and a full chapter from each book toured. The reason it is called a FIRST Wild Card Tour is that you never know if the book will be fiction, non~fiction, for young, or for old...or for somewhere in between! Enjoy your free peek into the book!

You never know when I might play a wild card on you!


Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:


The Right Call

David C. Cook; New edition (March 1, 2010)

***Special thanks to Audra Jennings, Senior Media Specialist, of The B&B Media Group for sending me a review copy.***







Kathy Herman is a best-selling suspense novelist who has written fifteen novels since retiring from her family’s Christian bookstore business. Kathy and her husband, Paul, have three grown children and five grandchildren and live in Tyler, Texas. This is the third title in the Sophie Trace trilogy, which also includes The Real Enemy, and The Last Word.


Visit the author's website.

The Right Call, by Kathy Herman from David C. Cook on Vimeo.



Product Details:

List Price: $14.99
Paperback: 400 pages
Publisher: David C. Cook; New edition (March 1, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 1434767841
ISBN-13: 978-1434767844

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:


Drew Langley jumped at the loud thud upstairs and resisted the temptation to bang on the wall and dispel the roaring laughter that followed. Was he the only student in the apartment building still studying for finals?


A warm breeze rattled the blinds, and he closed his eyes, inhaling the intoxicating fragrance of magnolia blossoms wafting from the south campus of Stanton College. It took every ounce of discipline he could muster not to close his books and give in to the lure of spring.


He heard rubber soles on the hardwood floor and lifted his gaze as his roommate came to a quick stop in front of the mirror over the worn living-room sofa.


Tal Davison wet his fingers and smoothed his hair. “I see you’re still studying. I guess that means you’re not coming.”


“To what? I thought you had a date.”


“Why do you make me tell you everything twice? You’re worse than my grandmother.”


Drew put down his pencil. “Sorry, I’ve been focused on other things. Tell me again. I’m listening.”


Tal came and stood in the doorway of Drew’s bedroom, his arms folded across his chest. “I’m going over to Henry’s for a junk-food buffet and beer. You’re invited.”


“Thanks. But I really need to study for my English lit final. It’s next week, and I’ve got chapters of catching up to do.”


“Suit yourself. I’m brain-dead. I couldn’t learn another thing if you paid me.” Tal started to go and then stopped. “Listen, thanks again for letting me move in here for the last few weeks. It’s nice sharing an apartment that doesn’t reek of marijuana. I hope I haven’t been as big a pain as your other roommate.” He shot Drew a half smile.


Drew leaned back and folded his arms. “Hey, not at all, man. I hope you don’t think I’ve been ignoring you. It’s just that I have to keep up the grades. No four-oh, no scholarship. There’s no way I can afford to attend Stanton without it.” I don’t have a rich father footing the bill.


“Doesn’t it cramp your style to go to college in Sophie Trace? Your parents are pretty close by, aren’t they?”


“Thanks to the scholarship I can live off campus. That’s all the independence I need. It’s nice going home whenever I want. My parents really help me stay on track.” Drew studied Tal’s expression.


“I take it you wish your dad wasn’t so close?”


Tal got quiet for a moment and seemed to be somewhere else. “He’s much too busy to breathe down my neck. And he doesn’t care about my grades as long as I pass and he can tell his cronies that his namesake’s attending his alma mater and is going to work for him after graduation.”


“Is that so bad?”


“I just wish he cared more about me and less about his image. I’m not sure I can ever measure up to his expectations.”


“Come on, man. You’ve got it made in the shade. All you have to do is get through one more year, and he’ll hand you the job of a lifetime. I thought you were pumped about it.”


Tal flashed a crooked smile. “I’m trying to be. It’s my big chance to make Dad proud of me. It’s all he’s talked about for years. But there’s a lot of pressure, learning to run a big corporation. The closer I get, the more intimidated I feel.”


“He must think you can do it, Tal. There’s a lot at stake for him, too.” Even if he is handing it to you on a silver platter.


“Maybe I’ll buy a little time after I graduate—tell Dad I’m burned-out and need to backpack across Europe for a while before I jump into the corporate world.”


A grin tugged at Drew’s cheeks. “Then you’d need someone to babysit your Hummer. Can I apply for the job? Man, I wish I’d been there when your dad had it delivered to your birthday party.”


“It was an awesome way to turn twenty-one, all right. But I’d trade it in a heartbeat for a relationship with my dad like you have with yours.”


“I guess I take it for granted.”


“Well, don’t,” Tal said. “I can’t remember the last time I sat down and had a real conversation with mine. He’s either working himself to death or hiding out at the lake house with wife number four—the fashion model who’s got silicone for brains.”


“I didn’t realize she was his fourth wife.”


“And she’s pregnant with daughter number seven. Maybe he’s going for the record.”


“Yeah, but you’re still his only son. And you and your mother are close.”


“Not in proximity. She’s spending a lot of time in New York with her boyfriend. He deals in fine art, and she likes to go to the auctions with him. I doubt I’ll see her anytime soon.”


Drew shifted his weight. Why hadn’t Tal mentioned before that his mother was seeing someone?


“Actually, I’m happy for her,” Tal said. “And I don’t mind sharing her Nashville house with the maid, the cook, and the butler. I’ll lie around the pool and read sci-fi novels and give my brain a rest. I’m so burned-out I can’t stand to think about another year of studying.”


“You’ll be ready to hit it again in the fall. Just think how good you’ll feel when you get your degree.”


Tal smiled wryly. “Would you believe my dad’s executive bonus last year was ten million? I must be nuts not to be more excited about the job.”


No kidding. “So why aren’t you?”


“I don’t know … my dad’s ruthless. And the company takes precedence over everyone and everything. I want more out of life than that.”


“I hear you. But if it were me, I’d at least try it long enough to earn a couple million and then go do whatever I wanted.“


“I’ve thought of that.” Tal stood up straight, the result of his beer drinking and bingeing hanging over his belt. “But I have a feeling that once Dad has me under his thumb, I’ll never get out from under. What I really want to do is go to the police academy.”


“Have you told him how you feel?”


“I tried. But Dad doesn’t really care how I feel. It’s my duty as his only son to keep the family business going. If I turn my back on that, he’ll basically disown me. Not that we’re close now, but it’s hard to think of having no dad. Hey, enough serious talk. It’s party time. Sure you don’t want to come?”


“Yeah, I’ve got to hit the books. Who’s your designated driver?”


“Don’t need one. I’m walking.”


“You think that’s smart? Henry’s neighborhood isn’t exactly the safest part of town.”


“I’ll be fine. But I’ll tell you what”—Tal laughed and tossed his keys to Drew—“if I don’t make it back alive, the Hummer’s all yours.”


©2010 Cook Communications Ministries. The Right Call by Kathy Herman. Used with permission. May not be further reproduced. All rights reserved.

REVIEW:

Just how much trouble can the Jessup family get into? A neverending amount it seems, what with this latest suspense involving the deaths of several more people in Sophie Trace.

What I liked most about The Right Call was the way in which Kathy Herman threw out seemingly insignificant things -- a snippet of dialogue, a character trait, etc.--and later turned them into very significant items. On the flipside of that coin, she had me thinking that one item in particular would become significant--I won't say what--but it never did and it wasn't necessary for a satisfactory conclusion. Writing in this manner is the hallmark of a great suspense author, as is the ability to throw plot twist after twist at the reader, none of which are gratuitous or lacking in belief. Kathy Herman does both.

Kathy also equally balanced the continuing romance of Ethan Langley and Vanessa Jessup, the daughter of Chief Brill Jessup, with the suspense plot. When the story ended, I found myself wanting more so I was delighted to discover, by way of the author's notes, that I will get just that in her upcoming series. The Right Call is an enjoyable romantic suspense read.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Teaser Tuesdays -- 2 For 1

I've got three books going right now: one novel, one diet book, and one Bible commentary. How many teasers can I give? I have two out of three books at my fingertips so I'll share from both of them.

Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along! Just do the following:
  • Grab your current read
  • Open to a random page
  • Share two (2) “teaser” sentences from somewhere on that page (in the comments or via link to your own blog)
  • BE CAREFUL NOT TO INCLUDE SPOILERS! (make sure that what you share doesn’t give too much away! You don’t want to ruin the book for others!)
  • Share the title and author, too, so that other TT participants can add the book to their TBR Lists if they like your teasers!
"Most of the people who came to this Saturday night service were young--and dressed to go out afterward. Would they leave here to go hit the bars and clubs in midtown, feeling as if they'd had their does of church for the week so it was okay to go get plastered afterward?" -- page 171, A Case for Love by Kaye Dacus

"Mindfulness keeps you paying attention to what is happening to you from moment to moment...You do this through the simple practice of slowing down your eating, enjoying and savoring each bit, and keeping the conversation pleasant." -- page 198, Dr. Colbert's "I Can Do This" Diet by Don Colbert, M.D.

Reading anything interesting?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, March 15, 2010

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- March 13, 2010

Missed publishing this post on Saturday. Hope everyone had a great weekend and remembered to turn their clocks ahead so they weren't late Sunday morning...

Don't those em dashes make you crazy? Brian Klems of Writers Digest demonstrates how to use em dashes properly in your writing.

Young adult lit comes of age? So says the LA Times (ignore the pesky ads in the middle of the article)

One of my former crit partners blogged about this one earlier in the week. Lulu Titlescorer is a place where you can plug in your proposed title and it will assess for you how close to a bestselling title it may be.

Jane Friedman of Writers Digest spent some time with her Midwestern neighbor and self-publishing giant, AuthorSolutions, and offers an interesting perspective on a company that has taken a lot of heat in recent months.

Author Kurt Vonnegut on "How to Write With Style".

An oft debated subject among Christian writers is whether the message should be subtle or obvious. Author Brandilyn Collins posted a response by Randy Ingermanson) that takes on this topic and broadens it to the perils of deceiving readers about the theme in fiction.

Classic Romance Revival is launching a new publishing company and along with it, a contest for unpublished writers. The "First Flight" contest offers a publishing contract and three-month promotion package.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Friday, March 12, 2010

Featured Book: It's In My Blood by Shawneda Marks

It is time for a FIRST Wild Card Tour book review! If you wish to join the FIRST blog alliance, just click the button. We are a group of reviewers who tour Christian books. A Wild Card post includes a brief bio of the author and a full chapter from each book toured. The reason it is called a FIRST Wild Card Tour is that you never know if the book will be fiction, non~fiction, for young, or for old...or for somewhere in between! Enjoy your free peek into the book!

You never know when I might play a wild card on you!


Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:


It's in my Blood

SC Creations (December 1, 2009)

***Special thanks to Shawneda Marks for sending me a review copy.***

ABOUT THE AUTHOR:

Shawneda Marks is known as the activist author. She loves to sound the trumpet about important issues. In addition to being a tree hugger and running her charitable organization she loves to weave stories. Her heart and passion surround helping people be wellness walkers. Marks novels address issues in the faith based community while bringing laughter, conversation, revelation and hope. The nonfiction books are written at this time explicitly for women to be encouraged, empowered, beautiful from the inside out and most important whole!

Visit the author's website.

Product Details:

List Price: $14.99
Paperback: 274 pages
Publisher: SC Creations (December 1, 2009)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0615304664
ISBN-13: 978-0615304663

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:


Prologue

Rosalyn wanted to give a courtesy wave to the driver of the minivan she cut off switching from the far left to the far right lane on Houston’s interstate ten but she had to focus. Several drivers blasted their horns as she pushed all six hundred ninety horses to their maximum. She glanced into her rearview mirror and swore as the black SUV on her tail gunned and pulled within inches of her bumper. Her cell phone rang. Rajj’s name and number lit up the screen. He ignored her calls and office visits for weeks, told her he didn’t want anything else to do with her. Now he chased her down the interstate like a madman. Confusion, fear and hope knotted her stomach. She pressed talk.

“Rajj, please slow down and think about what you’re doing!” Rosalyn jumped into the left lane again and missed an eighteen wheeler by centimeters.

“Why! You didn’t think about what you did. A baby Rosalyn…” Rajj screamed into the phone. “You tricked me into getting you pregnant.”

Rosalyn revved her engine and shot forward past two motorists. Sweat dripped from her nose and down her back. She sighed when the SUV disappeared from her rearview mirror. Tricked seemed such an ugly word. Their time together created life. He was the first man she loved since college, why didn’t he see that? He felt something for her.

“Then you told Toney. My wife—.”

“Fiancé…excuse me—ex fiancé who I didn’t tell anything.” Rosalyn sped up as Rajj cut off two cars and squeezed in behind her again. When his engagement ended she offered her love, a family and happily ever after to him. He offered her the other side of his front door, and a rejection that ripped her soul apart at the core.

Rosalyn’s car lurched forward as he bumped her from behind and called her every derogatory word for female she knew and a few she didn’t. Rosalyn almost pressed the gas pedal through the floor and pulled the steering wheel left before changing her mind and sliding into a small opening in the right lane. Sweat soaked through her tight red sweater and camisole.

Rajj’s SUV pulled into the left lane and sped ahead of her. An eighteen-wheeler skimmed the back of the SUV. Time slowed as Rajj’s vehicle turned then flipped. A scream ripped from her throat as his body burst through the front window into the concrete median. His SUV hit the wall and slid several hundred feet scraping parts of the asphalt back. She turned on her hazard lights. Motorists slowed allowing her to pull off of the interstate onto the shoulder behind the path his SUV left on the interstate.

Rosalyn’s trembling hands refused to allow her fingers to press the small numbered buttons as sobs began to well up in her throat. She flung the cell phone into the passenger seat. The same way Rajj flung her heart aside when his relationship and their tryst as he called it ended. Her heart broke again. Snapshots of their nights together flashed in her mind as she wiped at the tears spilling from her eyes. Rajj the man she lived to love for months lay twisted in a bloody heap next to the median. Cars moved to the right lanes as drivers slowed to look at the body and wreckage of the crumpled luxury vehicle.

The pulse in her ears grew deafening as she pushed her car door open. Every synapse of her brain instructed her to run to Rajj. Rosalyn wrapped her hands around her midsection and shivered as traffic crawled by. She took a step towards his limp body. Her legs gave out as her body crashed down to the gravel beneath her. Her mind went blank with the impact of her head against the ground.

Rosalyn squinted at the outline of a man of the man hovering over her. Her hand flew to her forehead to stop the pounding behind her eyes.

“Ma’am you okay?” the trooper took her by the elbow and guided her to a sitting position. He looked at the puddle of blood left by Rajj’s -body. “Did you see what happened?

Nodding she forced herself to make intelligible words between tears as she told the officer of their cat and mouse chase all over the interstate. Sobs overtook her as she described the moments that passed like years as Rajj flew through his windshield into the wall. Rosalyn wiped her nose with her left arm. She winced and grabbed the back of her head as a pain shot through her shoulder and neck.

“You need to have yourself looked at let me call another ambulance.” He reached for his shoulder.

“I’m not leaving my car.” Rosalyn grabbed him with her right hand. “I can drive myself to the hospital, that’s not necessary.”

“Is there someone you can call to pick it up and meet you there?” His eyes wandered to the median where emergency workers attempted to secure Rajj on a stretcher.

A breath Rosalyn didn’t know she held eased from her lips as she nodded. “Yes.”

“Call them now we’ll finish talking to you at the hospital.” The officer stopped traffic as he crossed back over toward the SUV.

A cool wind whipped through Rosalyn as she made her way back to the driver seat. She retrieved the cell phone from her passenger seat and called her best friend. The state trooper climbed into his cruiser and the siren blasted bringing traffic to a standstill. Rajj’s hand fell limp from the gurney as they eased him into the small space under the glaring bright light on the back of the ambulance. She ignored the snot and tears covering her face and climbed into the back of the ambulance.

***

Rosalyn sat on the bed behind the half opened curtain with her left arm in a temporary sling. She exhaled as a group of people led Rajj’s ex-fiancé into the waiting area. Her eyes closed as she leaned her head on the wall. The curtain snatched open and closed, Rosalyn popped up.

“Rosy. Oh my goodness! Are you alright? I almost got a ticket trying to get here. I knew something was wrong when I didn’t see you at the rink. You haven’t missed a Friday at Golden Skate since I moved here.”

“Slight concussion, something called a seatbelt injury. The baby is fine though. I think.” Rosalyn rested her right hand over her flat stomach.

“It was Rajj, wasn’t it? Love of your life, the guy you came over my house in hysterics over a few days ago. ” Becca tried to smooth the unruly curls crowning her face as she sat next to Rosalyn. “Why was he trying to kill you?”

“Becca, I wanted to tell you. I didn’t plan on falling in love with someone else’s man. He broke all my rules…the way he kissed me. What am I supposed to do now? How am I gonna raise a baby by myself? He seemed so into me, all those nights we spent together…things were more than physical. He never said it but he loved me. It might not seem to make sense but I know he did. Then when she dumped him… I thought I was the one he wanted to be with. He just wanted what they all want. Why did I think he cared? About me. ” Rosalyn tried to stand up.

“What are you doing? You better wait for the doctor Rosy.” Becca placed a firm but gentle hand on Rosalyn’s right arm. She pulled the curtain closed as another group of people glanced in while walking by. “Bump him, I care about you. Now you have to start taking better care of yourself. ”

“Becca, no! We have a baby on the way. He is everything to me…I love him. It started out like all the others but something changed. We talked about everything, he looked at me and I felt alive. I felt desirable as a person. I thought he loved me. I thought he could help me. Whose gonna help me?” Rosalyn looked down then smiled at the concern she recognized in her alum’s eyes.

“I’m here for you but I’m not enough? You have family back in Chicago you can depend on Rosalyn. Call your parents, take some time off, and talk this over with them.” Becca rubbed Rosalyn’s right arm.

Rosalyn dropped her head back. The thought of going back to Chicago made her shudder. The events of the night replayed in her mind. Earlier in the evening before the chase she imagined a happy life with Rajj and their baby. After a few more days the realization he loved her and wanted their baby would drive him to her. She wiped the tears from her cheeks and eyes. Instead his anger drove him into a wall and out of her life for good. Dead men didn’t change their minds, or fall in love. All hope of their getting together died with Rajj in the ambulance on the way to the hospital. Her fast life in Houston came to a screeching halt in one night. Things were getting bad, bad enough for her to contemplate going home to Chicago.



First Trimester

Chapter One


Rosalyn filled her mouth with water and gulped down a fist full of pills. She fidgeted with the radio buttons on the arm of her seat. Bong. The “fasten your seatbelt” light turned on next to the air globe and attendant call button above her.

“Flight 118 to Chicago is set to land as scheduled at 10:25A.M. Flight attendants please complete landing cross check.” The scratchy voice interrupted the music piping through her earphones provided by the airline.

Her watch read 10:05A.M. She wanted to be happy to have somewhere to go, but couldn’t push past the anger. If Rajj just … it didn’t matter. Rosalyn decided to focus on staying healthy.

She needed these next few weeks to talk to her father. A thought popped in her mind to visit her favorite spa, maybe even invite her mother. Rosalyn couldn’t remember the last time they spent an enjoyable day together. A pamper us day might prove to be a starting point for them to bond, rebuild a relationship. Rosalyn admitted to herself how much she still wanted a relationship with Naomi to happen. Did she want it bad enough to invite her to the spa? Maybe not, she wanted to leave the spa feeling refreshed. Dad would help her get her


mind right. So much to talk about, so many decisions, six weeks would be over… quick. Rosalyn looked out of the window onto the snow covered roofs as the plane descended and readied to taxi into Midway International. This city held onto the cold like a security blanket. Six weeks, then back to Houston and on with her life.

Rosalyn shook her head as the rooftops grew larger. What kind of life would she have with a baby? What kind of life for a baby with her? What did she do to deserve this mess?

Rosalyn followed the second hand on her watch.10:15 A.M. She imagined Saint Naomi’s reaction to the news, unwed, pregnant and HIV positive. Her parents sounded happy for her to come home when she spoke to them last night on the phone. How happy when they found out her condition?

Rosalyn inhaled the stale recycled air and sighed. Naomi’s disapproving lecture and drama were certain. Her Dad crossed her mind, and that look. The one he perfected her last three years in high school, sheer disappointment. Not the return home she planned. Well not all of it.

Whatever happened to mercy? All the grace and stuff they preached and shouted about in church during her childhood. Rosalyn looked at her watch. 10:20 AM.

SSS

Her father sat in the living room as Rosalyn entered her childhood home. Naomi walked over and gave her father a gentle kiss on the lips. Rosalyn smiled and ran to him. He stood up and pulled her into a bear hug. Her eyes glazed over as she went back to a better time in her life. She inhaled his scent not wanting the moment to end but determined to get the worst part of her trip over she pulled out of his embrace.

Naomi perched on the far end of the sofa. Rosalyn plopped down in the middle and pulled her father down next to her. She looked at Naomi then back at her father. Her nerves calmed a bit as he gave her one of his “its okay honey” smiles. She dragged in a deep breath and took one of both her parents’ hands.

“I didn’t know what to do, and Becca suggested I use my rollover paid time off from last year to come home. With everything goin on…”

“What exactly is going on, Rosalyn? You turn down every invitation to come home since you graduated college then call and say you may need to be here for a few weeks.” Naomi said.

“Well I heard some rumors about layoffs, involuntary transfers—”

“So what, you’ve been there since you graduated college. Let your Dad tell it, you run the place.” Naomi rolled her eyes.

“Naomi, please. Let her finish...go ahead, sweetie” Her father nodded.

“There is no easy way,” Rosalyn filled her lungs with air then pushed it out, “Daddy, I’m almost three months pregnant and--,”

“Oh my goodness! Rosalyn,” Naomi took her hand from her daughter’s and covered her mouth.

“Mimi, calm down. And what Rosalyn? ” He looked at Naomi then back into Rosalyn’s tear filled eyes. “We won’t interrupt you again.”

“I’m…I’m...” Rosalyn cleared her throat and tried to ignore Naomi who covered her entire face with both of her hands, “not with the father anymore.”

Her father scrunched his eyebrows together and nodded his head in slow motion. Rosalyn studied the new painting on the wall. She leaned forward between her parents with her head down. Within seconds her face covered in tears. Her father pulled out his handkerchief and wiped the tears from her face. Shamed filled every inch of her being. Her plan to tell them everything fading with each gentle stroke, if her pregnancy brought this response her HIV positive status could kill them.

Rosalyn felt Naomi reposition herself on the couch. Naomi’s hand gripped Rosalyn’s trembling shoulder. She almost drowned in her father’s eyes bright with unshed tears. Next to her, Naomi’s lips moved and eyes closed.

“Daddy I’m sorry. Please forgive me. I’m so sorry.” Rosalyn sobbed and choked back her desire to bury her head into her father’s chest.

“Why are you sorry? I love you, Rosy, and I’ll love my grandchild.” Her father kissed her hair and rocked her while she cried. “Nothing could ever change that.”

Rosalyn took some comfort in his words. Peace tried to engulf her. She scooted away from Naomi’s hand fighting the urge to accept the warmth and comfort it offered. The desire to love and be loved overpowered by fear of another betrayal continued to wage war deep inside her. She felt Naomi kneel in front of the couch. She didn’t care how hard Naomi prayed, there weren’t enough prayers on earth to make her forget. Forgiveness would be a miracle.

REVIEW:

It's In My Blood starts out with a bang, which serves to capture the reader's attention from page one. The story, about a pregnant, HIV-positive young woman who has relationship issues with her mother, self-esteem issues that infect her relationship with everyone else, and faith issues doesn't lack for drama.

Although the story is a page turner, it becomes clear early on that this self-published work could benefit greatly from a professional edit. Poor punctuation and grammar repeatedly yank the reader out of the story until the reader is able to make a mental allowance for it.

Still, the tale of how Rosalyn reconciles with God and her mother is captivating. The topic of HIV/AIDs and how this disease is both perceived and handled by Christians is an explosive one and one worthy of consideration. Shawneda Marks does an excellent job of putting and keeping the issue at the forefront of the story, forcing the reader to look at it from a number of angles. I wish there'd been a little more examination of where some of the myths and falsehoods associated with this disease emanate from and why they are so hard to kill off, but overall this was a story that needed to be told and Ms. Marks did an admirable job of telling it.

It's In My Blood is actually the second book in a trilogy. I did not have the pleasure of reading the first but I look forward to the final installment, scheduled to be released in 2011.

This book was provided to me free of charge for review purposes by the author, Shawneda Marks.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Featured Book: Once In A Blue Moon by Leanna Ellis

This week, the


Christian Fiction Blog Alliance


is introducing


Once in a Blue Moon


B&H Books (March 1, 2010)


by


Leanna Ellis



ABOUT THE AUTHOR:

Leanna's sister recommended that she write, since she ‘wrote in her journal all the time.’ The idea took root and began to grow. So after five years of teaching, she quit and started writing, with no clue about the book business. Ignorance is bliss. If she’d known the odds against her, she might not have ever started writing.

For about three years, she wrote with a collaborator, but because she had so many ideas she began to write more stories on her own. She suffered numerous rejections. Deservedly so. But she was growing as a writer and learning. She went to as many conferences as she could manage. During that time, she met her future husband, fell in love and became engaged. She also began to final in contests and then actually began to win! The contests helped her get noticed by editors and agents. In March, the year Braveheart won the Best Picture Oscar, Victor/Victoria opened on Broadway, she sold her first book. It was her Cinderella year. She sold her book, got married and won RWA’s Golden Heart Award in Hawaii.

She wrote six books between her first baby’s birth and when the second baby turned one. Then she hit a wall. Not literally. But creatively. It’s not that she didn’t have any ideas, but her ideas didn’t fit the romance market. These new characters, random and weird as they were, began to take over the part of her brain that wasn’t domesticated. These stories were about all types of women, and so she began to let her writing grow in new and different ways.

Leanna Ellis sold more than 1.3 million romantic novels writing as Leanna Wilson, winning a Readers’ Choice award and the Romance Writers of America Golden Heart award for her work. Elvis Takes a Back Seat is the first book published under her married name, marking a new creative direction in her writing. Like Francine Rivers before her, Leanna has left behind a successful career as an author of secular romances to write novels of faith that glorify God. A former schoolteacher, Leanna is now a homeschool mom and lives with her husband and children in Keller, Texas.

ABOUT THE BOOK

Bryn Seymour was nine years old when her mother died under mysterious circumstances on the same day Apollo 11 made its historic lunar landing. Forty years later—divorced, working as an obituary writer, and duly cynical—she meets Howard, a conspiracy theorist who knew her mom and believes a small Texas town may hold clues to what really fueled her demise. Seeking closure, Bryn goes along for this men-in-black ride. But upon meeting Howard’s son Sam, an outspoken Christian, she can’t decide whose beliefs are more pie-in-the-sky.

The gravity of life has pulled Bryn down for decades. But a perfect love could be her first step to soaring. It only happens once in a blue moon.

If you would like to read the first chapter of Once in a Blue Moon, go HERE

Watch the book trailer:


Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, March 09, 2010

Teaser Tuesdays --It's In My Blood

Before we get to the book stuff...

No, we didn't win. But we did win our semi-final game, and thus, after losing in the championship game, our boys are the State Runner-ups, for which they received silver medals.

Soooo proud of those young men, heads held high in victory and in defeat.

Man, was I tired after shuttling back and forth halfway across the state two days in a row for games. Not to mention cheering on another basketball game early Sat for my middle son, before the aforementioned championship game for my oldest.

Still catching up outside of work on email and blogging, not to mention sleep. (So bear with me if I owe you a response to something.)

We now return to our regularly scheduled program...

Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along! Just do the following:
  • Grab your current read
  • Open to a random page
  • Share two (2) “teaser” sentences from somewhere on that page (in the comments or via link to your own blog)
  • BE CAREFUL NOT TO INCLUDE SPOILERS! (make sure that what you share doesn’t give too much away! You don’t want to ruin the book for others!)
  • Share the title and author, too, so that other TT participants can add the book to their TBR Lists if they like your teasers!

"Who else could she run to? You turned her trust and confidence in you to hatred and bitterness." -- page 141, It's In My Blood by Shawneda Marks

I'm still in the first few pages but I can tell you this book starts with a bang.  It's the book feature for later this week, so I'll have a full review then.

Reading anything interesting?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, March 06, 2010

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- March 6, 2010

Okay, first things first. My son's team may be playing for a state basketball championship today. (If they didn't lose in the semi-finals yesterday, after I've already posted this.)

Go Terrapins!

Now that that's out of the way, how about more on the ebook pricing wars...

So it seems, as The NY Times delineates what the cost of publishing a book really is, that publishers are trying to charge higher prices, not just to cover costs, but to hold off the forward motion of ebooks so they can use the profit margin from huge hardcover successes to support new authors.

As one example, what Macmillan has decided to do about ebook pricing and releases...

Authors, be careful of what you speak (and to whom). NY Times bestselling author Douglas Preston found out the hard way that not all readers want to hear author's opinions on the current ebook pricing wars.

Bypassing all the ebook hoopla, a group of published authors who love readers have come together to sell original and previously published works online--no DRM, encryption or passwords--at low prices. Check out A Writer's Work. Authors with two or more published books are welcome to inquire about joining.

Moving on to writing...

Writers are always giving other writers advice. But advice to writers from a reader...priceless!

Author and dramatist Lynne Gentry demonstrates how to imbue setting with conflict to keep readers from becoming "setting skimmers".

Author Leanna Ellis discusses the differences between theme and premise.

Agent Nathan Bransford talks about archetypes vs. cliches -- can it simply be Twilight with zombies?

Enjoy the weekend, the first in March. Is it spring yet?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, March 03, 2010

Crit Partners Scattered in the Winds

Writing for publication really is a journey, a winding, sometimes fits-and-starts, sometimes fluid, forward motion kind of thing.

Not long ago, I raved about my critique group, the one I joined just about a year ago.

Well, as of last week, we are critique partners no more.

No, it had nothing to do with my recent critique disappointment. Nor did we have any major or even minor issues with each other, at least not of which I'm aware. It was just time. Everyone was headed in different directions. Nicole O'Dell, multipublished YA author, is considering a group in her genre. Contest multifinalist Lynda Schab will be working with a group of writers who share her same agent. Valerie Comer is working hard on a four-book series and, because she likes to finish her stories before submitting them, she's pretty heads down right now. I only recently submitted my first chapter to the group, although I've been critiquing their stuff for the past 12 months. Even though my current wip isn't finished, I too prefer to have my first draft done before getting outside input.

Then there's Heidi Main, who left us a few months back for another critique group. Heidi's my accountability partner and she's really keeping me on my toes.

In the past, I've held off from mentioning their names but these really are a great bunch of ladies, all of whom have blogs you should check out, and you'll be hearing more about them and their writing soon.

I'll miss the group. These ladies encouraged and supported me, praying with me about some tough, non-writing stuff. We plan to keep in touch, which will be fairly easy since we're all blogging, FB'ing, Twittering, and the like.

So I'm critique group-less, for now. Again.

And I'm good with that. My focus is really on the writing, getting the story done and developing more of a writing discipline. Heidi's keeping me on track. And I'm already connected with another writer friend who writes part-time like me, and we've agreed to exchange chapters when the time is right for us.

Just another step on the writing journey...

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, March 02, 2010

Featured Book: Screen Play by Chris Coppernoll

ABOUT THE BOOK

Screen Play (David C. Cook 2010), the third novel from author Chris Coppernoll, is an inspiring story of friendship and faith set amidst the complexities of Hollywood and cleverly combined with an uplifting love story reminiscent of Sleepless in Seattle.

At thirty, Harper fears her chances for a thriving acting career and finding true love are both fading fast. After a devastating year of unemployment and isolation in Chicago, Harper is offered an unexpected role in a Broadway play—as understudy to New York’s biggest diva––and everything in Harper's world changes.

Harper also hopes to find love in NYC, but when it doesn't happen, she reluctantly signs up to an online matchmaking site. Frustration mounts when the only match Harper is even remotely interested in lives in a remote territory on the opposite coast, thousands of miles away. A faith conversation during her year in Chicago shapes how Harper sees everything. She wants to see God at work in her life, but His ways are mysterious, and she's faced with challenges in the secular world of Broadway. Harper feels like an actress who doesn’t act and a woman in love with someone she's never even seen, but God's about to change all that.

Linked through the contemporary, text message world of internet dating, Harper learns it's possible to care for someone outside her own universe, even when that someone can't be touched, and ultimately how to love. She reaches out through the impersonal world of cyberspace and becomes more aware than ever of God reaching out to her. Sometimes the person farthest away from you, she discovers, is the one who's closest to your heart.

Screen Play is a story about believing that God can do great things, even when we’re at our weakest,” say Coppernoll. “I hope readers will be swept up in Harper’s story instantly and that their excitement won’t let up until the very last page.”

REVIEW

I enjoyed Screen Play by Chris Coppernoll.  I'm trying to remember when I've read a romance written by a male author and enjoyed it this much. Romances by male authors are rare to begin with, and the few I've read have been rather disappointing. But not Screen Play.

The style of this novel was very literary in flavor yet it is very much a work of contemporary fiction. As Harper pursues her acting career and her professional dreams begin to come true, her romantic life is played out against the backdrop of Internet dating sites.

Set in NYC, a place I'm very familiar with, some of the novel's details felt not quite right, then other things felt perfect. I love novels that take me home, and the majority of this one was spot on with my memory of and continuing love affair with metropolitan New York.

If I had a problem with anything, it was the "dump" at the beginning of one chapter relating the history of the fictitious play, Apartment 19. Totally unnecessary. I'd rather it'd been provided piecemeal as needed. But shortly after, the novel really began to grow on me. I liked Harper, as well as her friends, Avril and Ben, right from the beginning. They seemed like cool people, people it might be interesting to know. I rooted for Harper and whispered to her to choose the right guy, the same way people talk to movie screens in theaters. I sure hope we get to spend more time with these characters in the future.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Chris Coppernoll is the author of six books including Screen Play, A Beautiful Fall and Providence. A national speaker to singles, Chris is also the founder of Soul2Soul, a syndicated radio program airing on 800 outlets in 20 countries. Chris holds a Masters degree from Rockbridge Seminary and is deeply in love with his wife, novelist Christa Parrish.



Screen Play by Chris Coppernoll

David C Cook/January 1, 2010

ISBN: 978-1-4347-6482-9/342 pages/softcover/$14.99


A copy of this book was provided for review purposes by David C Cook Communications.


Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.