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Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Featured Book: The Berenstain Bears and the Gift of Courage by Mike Berenstain

Last week, I featured one of two new Berenstain Bears books.  Today I'm featuring the second, The Berenstain Bears and the Gift of Courage.

It is time for a FIRST Wild Card Tour book review! If you wish to join the FIRST blog alliance, just click the button. We are a group of reviewers who tour Christian books. A Wild Card post includes a brief bio of the author and a full chapter from each book toured. The reason it is called a FIRST Wild Card Tour is that you never know if the book will be fiction, non~fiction, for young, or for old...or for somewhere in between! Enjoy your free peek into the book!

You never know when I might play a wild card on you!


Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:


The Berenstain Bears and the Gift of Courage

Zonderkidz (April 9, 2010)

***Special thanks to Krista Ocier of Zondervan for sending me a review copy.***


ABOUT THE AUTHORS:



Stan and Jan Berenstain introduced the first Berenstain Bear books in 1962. Mike Berenstain grew up watching his parents work together to write about and draw these lovable bears. Eventually he started drawing and writing about them too. Mike is married to Andrea, and they have three children. They live in Pennsylvania, in an area that looks a lot like Bear Country.


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Product Details:

List Price: $3.99
Reading level: Ages 4-8
Paperback: 32 pages
Publisher: Zonderkidz (April 9, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0310712564
ISBN-13: 978-0310712565

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REVIEW

As I said last week, my boys really enjoyed these books.  This one, however, was our favorite of the two.  To teach Brother and Sister Bear about courage in the face of bullies, Papa Bear reads to them the story of David and Goliath.  Pay dirt!  A definite winner in the Woodside household, as I've always loved this Bible story and all of my boys do too.

This is a wonderful book to feature today as today is my 19th wedding anniversary.  It takes courage to be married that long.   I truly believe that.  Marriage brings its own ups and downs to notion of living.  he years are filled with missed expectations, hurts, and disappointments.  They're also filled with tremendous joys, marvels, and continued amazement.  All of that requires a courage that I fear many either don't have or aren't willing to dig deep enough to find in this day and age.  Anyway, I'm glad Hubby and I both have found the courage--it's definitely an individual thing--to love and live together for this many years. We draw on each other's faith and strength, and I pray we have many more.

Happy Anniversary, Babe!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, August 30, 2010

Featured Book: A Love for Tomorrow by Vanessa Miller

Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:

Whitaker House (September 1, 2010)
***Special thanks to Cathy Hickling of Whitaker House for sending me a review copy.***

ABOUT THE AUTHOR:


Vanessa Miller is a best-selling author, playwright, and motivational speaker. She started writing as a child, spending countless hours either reading or writing poetry, short stories, stage plays and novels. Vanessa’s creative endeavors took on new meaning in 1994 when she became a Christian. Since then, her writing has been centered on themes of redemption, often focusing on characters facing multi-dimensional struggles. Readers and critics alike have responded with overwhelming affirmation with her work topping several bestsellers lists and receiving numerous awards including “Best Christian Fiction Mahogany Award” and the “Red Rose Award for Excellence in Christian Fiction.” Her first Whitaker House book, Yesterday’s Promise debuted at #1 on the Black Christian News Network’s Bestsellers List.


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Product Details:

List Price: $9.99
Paperback: 240 pages
Publisher: Whitaker House (September 1, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 1603742085
ISBN-13: 978-1603742085

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:


Prologue

“Our wedding is next week, Michael. How can you possibly have cold feet now?” Serenity Williams asked her fiancĂ© with her hands on her hips.

“This isn’t about cold feet, Serenity. You’re not listening to me. I’m telling you, I can’t marry you. I’ve been trying to convince myself for weeks that it will work, but I realize now that it won’t.”

This was not happening to her. This was some crazy dream that she was going to wake up from any minute, because there was no way that the good reverend, Dr. Michael Randolph—the man she loved and had been planning to marry for the past three years—could be standing in front of her one week before the wedding, trying to call it off. But, just in case this wasn’t a dream, Serenity decided to play along. “Okay, Michael. Please tell me exactly what I haven’t been listening to.”

Michael took off his black fedora, revealing his full head of wavy, black hair. “Can you sit down on the couch with me so we can talk?”

She didn’t want to sit down and talk; she wanted to get married. Michael owed her a wedding. After all, she had spent five years with this man. They had dated for two years and then gotten engaged. That had been three years ago. She had told her friends that she and Michael had decided to wait until his ministry got off the ground before getting married, but, in truth, it had been Michael’s decision to wait. Now that his ministry was growing, what did he want her to do—wait another five years so he could work on expanding his church so that it reached megachurch status?

Michael sat down on the couch and held out his hand, gesturing for Serenity to join him.

She sat down next to him but said nothing.

“Serenity, the first thing you need to understand is that I love you more than life itself. It is because of how much I love you that I can’t go through with this marriage.”

When am I going to wake up? Serenity held up her hand. “Wait a minute, now. I’m totally confused. Are you really telling me that you can’t marry me because you love me too much?”

“Let me finish, honey,” Michael said. He took a deep breath and then trod on. “We’ve put off our wedding for three years now, because I’ve been hoping you’ll get over your competitive ways. It’s this constant rivalry between us that’s driving me crazy. I’m afraid that the love I have for you will fade because of the competitive spirit you have.”

“The competitive spirit I have?” Serenity exploded as she stood up. “I’m not in competition with anybody. I’m just doing what God has called me to do.”

“That’s what you tell people. But it’s obvious that you are competitive. You wouldn’t be where you are today if you weren’t.”

“Okay, so what if I am a little competitive? What does that have to do with you and me? You’re the pastor of a church. I don’t have a church; I travel all over the world preaching, and I have a television ministry.”

“See? That’s what I mean,” he said, pointing at her. Then, he stood up, too. “You’re always throwing the fact that you have a TV ministry in my face. And you love it when other preachers invite you to speak at their churches. You’ve even been trying to get behind my pulpit for the past year.”

“That is not true. I have never asked to preach at your church. I have more speaking engagements than I can accept in a year, so I certainly don’t need to beg anybody for the opportunity to preach.”

“See, there you go again. Every time you open your mouth, it’s always to say something about what you’re doing in ministry and how you’re in such high demand.”

It wasn’t true. Serenity had never bragged about her ministry. At least, not in the way Michael was making it sound like she did. Yes, she was grateful that God had allowed her ministry to grow in the manner in which it had over the last two years. And, yes, she expressed that gratitude to anyone who would listen. But she wasn’t bragging. She was trying to communicate to others that she understood how blessed she was. Serenity’s father was a bishop who presided over seven megachurches and ten smaller to medium-sized ones. He had often tried to get her to take over one of his churches as a pastor, but she didn’t believe that God was leading her in that direction.

She had stepped out in faith when she’d started her television ministry on a newly developed cable channel. Her television program was part Oprah, part Joyce Meyer in style. She interviewed many pastors and teachers of the gospel. And then, when she was invited to minister, she brought along her camera crew and broadcast those events on her program, as well. She and Michael had discussed the format of her show at its inception. At the time, he had thought it was a great idea. He’d even told her that he could see her show going big time.

He just hadn’t told her that, when it did, he would hold it against her. “Michael, please don’t do this. Maybe we need to see a marriage counselor so we can work this out before the wedding.”

“Don’t you find the fact that we need a marriage counselor before we even get married a bit ludicrous?”

“I don’t know about that. What definitely seems ludicrous to me is the fact that you’re jealous of a ministry that God’s hand is on.” She took a deep breath, tried to calm herself, and said, “Look, Michael. I’m thirty-four years old. You’re forty-two. We both agreed that now is the perfect time for us to have children. I’ve waited for you for five years. Why are you backing out now?”

“I’m sorry, Serenity. I just can’t marry someone whose ministry overshadows my own. The next thing I know, people will be calling me ‘Mr. Williams’ instead of ‘Pastor Randolph.’” He shook his head. “I just can’t deal with that.”

This was real—Michael was calling off their wedding—and Serenity felt as if her world was coming to an end. “What do you want me to do, Michael? Do you want me to give up my TV ministry? Is that it?”

He put his hat back on. “No. That won’t work. You’ve created such a following now that, even if you weren’t on TV, preachers would still be calling for you to speak at their conferences.”

“I don’t understand. I thought you loved me.”

Michael didn’t respond. He picked up his car keys and walked out of the house without looking back.

If he had turned around, he would have seen the tears that flowed down Serenity’s face and the longing that she felt way down deep in her heart. But Michael didn’t care about that. He cared only about being “overshadowed.” Why hadn’t she seen this coming? Her best friend, Melinda Marks, had tried to warn her two years ago, when she’d said, “Trying to do the will of God and the will of your man gets hard sometimes.”

At the time, Serenity had thought that Melinda was referring to her relationship with Bishop Steven Marks. Steven and Melinda had been engaged long ago, but Steven had felt that he couldn’t marry a woman who wanted to preach the gospel rather than stay at home and be a wife and mother. So, he’d called off their wedding. But God’s will had prevailed in that situation, and Steven and Melinda had finally gotten married eighteen months ago.

As she wiped the tears from her eyes, Serenity told herself not to worry. Michael would come to his senses, and they would be married on Saturday, as planned.

But on Thursday, her father, Bishop Lawrence Williams, called and informed her that Michael’s secretary was phoning everyone on the guest list and letting them know that the wedding had been cancelled. That’s when Serenity finally faced the fact that Michael wasn’t coming back. He had allowed his ego to override their love, and she was crushed.

“Why didn’t you tell me, sweetheart?” her father asked.

“I thought he would change his mind. I just didn’t believe he was serious.”

Serenity had been calling Michael for the past three days, leaving messages on his answering machine and voice mail, letting him know that she still loved him, and that she still wanted to go through with the wedding. Why should she have to wait ten years for Michael to come to his senses, as Melinda had done with Steven? Serenity was convinced that if they just went ahead and got married, they would be able to work everything out later.

“Why is he doing this?” her father asked, cutting in on her thoughts.

“He says I’m too competitive—that he can’t marry a woman who overshadows him and his ministry.”

“Oh, sweetheart, I’m so sorry to hear that. But if that’s the way he feels, then he doesn’t deserve you. I believe that, if you’re meant to marry a preacher, God will send one who can handle your anointing.”

Serenity didn’t respond to her father’s remark, and they brought their conversation to an end. But, by the time she had hung up the phone, she had made a very clear resolution. She wouldn’t waste another minute of her life on another ego-driven preacher.

***

Pastor Phillip McKnight was a man who had been greatly blessed by God. There was no other explanation for the extraordinary life he’d led. He’d played sixteen years of professional football, being traded only twice and winning a Super Bowl championship with both teams. The last team he’d played for had been the Tampa Bay Buccaneers. He’d been thirty-seven and still fit enough to play, if he’d wanted, when he’d voluntarily retired. But Phillip had other things on his mind. He’d earned millions of dollars from his winning football career, and now he wanted to live out the rest of his life serving God and winning souls for the kingdom.

When he arrived at the new building of the church he pastored, New Destiny, he entered, eager to check on the progress of the construction workers. He had given up a lot to build this church, but he had no regrets. In his lifetime, he had experienced fame and fortune, the likes of which most people only dream about. But none of the things he had accomplished ever truly fulfilled him. Then, one day, he’d met Jesus, and it was as if the blinders came off. He began to see things so much more clearly. He received new direction for his life.

Jimmy Dayton, the foreman for the construction company, met Phillip in the fellowship hall. “I’ve got something to show you,” he told him excitedly.

“Lead the way,” Phillip said, hoping that at least one of the rooms in the church was finally finished. They had been making plans for the building for a year and a half, but construction hadn’t started until nine months ago. Right now, New Destiny was holding its services in a high school gymnasium, and he was getting ready to come home.

Jimmy opened the double doors to the sanctuary, and Phillip walked in, his eyes beholding the beauty of the navy blue wall-to-wall carpet and the matching cushioned pews, which spanned the three-thousand-seat sanctuary. The glass podium he’d ordered was in the pulpit area, waiting for him to stand behind it and preach the Word. He turned to Jimmy. “This looks incredible! What else is finished?”

“Just your office, but the structure is solid enough for your congregation to have services here soon.”

“This is the best news I’ve had all week!” Phillip exclaimed. “I’m glad I stopped by today. How soon can we start holding our services in here?” He couldn’t keep the excitement out of his voice.

“Probably in about two weeks or so,” Jimmy said. “We need to get a couple more things done before the safety inspection.”

“Okay—but hurry up! I can’t wait to have our services in this sanctuary,” Phillip said before heading for his new office, where he sat down behind the desk. He finally felt like they were making progress. That sense of satisfaction enabled him to take out the envelope he’d been carrying around all day in his pocket and put it on his desk. He looked at the envelope for a full ten minutes before picking it up and opening it.

Slowly, he unfolded the divorce decree and stared at it for a few moments before throwing it back on his desk. Then, he leaned back in his chair, closed his eyes, and prayed for strength.











One

No, this man is not keeping me waiting like this, Serenity thought as she looked at her diamond-studded Gucci watch. It was one of her favorite accessories. The watch had been priced at two grand, but Serenity had talked the store manager into halving the price. Her father always told her that a woman should treat herself to something special every now and then. So, while she’d been on her honeymoon in the Bahamas—without the groom—she’d purchased this gorgeous watch without a second thought. She loved the look and feel of Gucci on her wrist.

But her beautiful timepiece was telling her that her interviewee was twenty minutes late. The infamous Pastor Phillip McKnight had cancelled the interview they’d scheduled for two weeks ago so that he and a group of evangelists, ministers, and church members could travel to Port-au-Prince, Haiti, to help with the disaster relief efforts after the terrible earthquake that had racked the country and claimed so many lives. Serenity wholeheartedly understood Pastor McKnight’s desire to be in Haiti during the country’s time of need. She had even set up a disaster relief fund on her own Web site, encouraging the viewers of her Christian television show, Walk This Way, to donate money. But Pastor McKnight had been back in the States for three days now. What in the world could have caused him to be late for their rescheduled meeting?

Serenity hadn’t wanted to interview Pastor McKnight in the first place. She was more comfortable with female preachers and teachers on her show, and she thought that her viewership, consisting predominantly of young to middle-aged women, would benefit most from hearing about the accomplishments and visions of other women around their age. But her producer kept telling her that women were also interested in men who served the Lord. So, here she was, being mistreated by another arrogant pastor who thought the world revolved around his inflated head.

Well, enough was enough. Serenity would not wait a second longer. She was going to gather up her camera crew and head back to Chicago. But, as she stood up, the office door opened, and a broad-shouldered man with skin the color of milk chocolate rushed through it. She had seen Pastor McKnight on television when he’d played for Tampa, but that football helmet must have blocked her view, because she had never imagined that the man was this fine in the flesh. Serenity sat back down and tried to process everything she knew about Pastor Phillip McKnight. He was a former football player who’d started building the church he now pastored a year before retiring from the NFL. She also knew that he was divorced.

“Sorry I’m so late,” he said with an apologetic smile. “I got a flat tire on the interstate and had to change it.”

That explained the dirt smudges she saw on his dress shirt. “I thought you forgot about our interview,” Serenity said, not willing to let him off the hook too easily.

Phillip stretched out his hand, and she took it. As they shook, Phillip said, “I could never forget an appointment with Serenity Williams. Even four flat tires couldn’t keep me away.”

Serenity pulled her hand out of his grip. The man was charming, but he was a preacher, and that made her mistrustful. It also made him off-limits. Ever since that swollen-headed reverend, Michael Randolph, had dumped her because her ministry was more successful than his, she had sworn off preachers. Even her brother, Larry the egomaniac, freely admitted that he wouldn’t be able to handle a wife who made more money or was better known than he. Falling in love with a preacher was for women who looked good in straitjackets and liked padded rooms. Best just to get this interview over with and forget she’d ever met Pastor Phillip McKnight. “So, would you like to talk in here first, or would you like to show the camera crew around the church so they can shoot some footage for the show?”

“Umm…well, I—I guess we could talk first, if—if that’s okay with you,” Phillip said.

“Are you sure, Pastor McKnight? Because, if you’d rather work with the film crew first, I’m okay with that.”

“No, no—please, sit back down. I’d like nothing more than to speak with you right now.” He sat down behind his desk and then said, “I forgot to charge my cell phone.”

What does that have to do with anything? Serenity wondered as she looked at him with questioning eyes.

Phillip pulled his cell phone out of his pocket and set it on his desk. “I would have called to tell you that I was going to be late, but my cell died on me.”

“Okay,” Serenity said. She had already moved on and wished he’d do the same. She pulled her notepad and pen out of her purse. “This is a pretty big church building for such a young ministry. Most preachers begin their ministries in storefronts or other smaller locales. What made you decide to go so big so soon?”

“No small talk, no chitchat; just get straight down to business, huh?”

Serenity put down her notepad. “I wasn’t trying to rush you, Pastor McKnight. It’s just that my father taught me about the value of time, and I try not to waste it.”

“Your father seems like a wise man. That’s why I have a meeting scheduled with him next week. I’ll be sure to let him know that his daughter still follows his advice.”

Serenity’s curiosity was piqued. She wanted to know why Pastor Phillip McKnight would leave the warmth of Tampa, Florida, to come to Chicago during the season of snowstorms and winter chills, but she didn’t ask. Instead, she said, “Make sure to bring a heavy coat and a pair of gloves. They don’t call it the Windy City for nothing.”

“I plan to. Your father already warned me about the weather. But he promised that your mother would fix a warm meal for my trouble.”

With a furrowed brow, Serenity said, “My mother normally tells me when she and my father are hosting out-of-town guests. I’m surprised she didn’t say anything about your visit.” Then, as if shaking off the shocking news, she picked her notepad back up. “Shall we continue, then, Pastor McKnight?”

Phillip put his elbows on his desk and smiled at her. “Would you do me a favor?” he asked.

“That depends. What do you need?” she asked with a wary grin on her face.

“Would you please call me Phillip? I don’t think we need to be so formal, especially since I’ll be meeting your parents next week.”

Okay, the suspense was killing her. There was no way she was going to be able to wait until she was finished with her work to call her mother and find out why Phillip was coming to dinner. “So, why are you and my father getting together next week?”

“I guess I’m kind of looking for a spiritual father, of sorts. I’ve been a pastor for only two years, and I’m getting to the point where I really need some godly guidance and mentoring.”

“Are you saying that you’ve decided to voluntarily bring the church you built under another man’s leadership?”

Phillip shook his head. “I don’t see it as the church I built. This church was built by God and the people of God, and I just want to continue to honor Him in all that we do.”

Most of the pastors Serenity knew weren’t eager to submit themselves to another man’s leadership. Michael, for example, had always complained about the things her father would ask him to do when he’d presided over Michael’s church. Even her thickheaded brother complained about their dad poking his nose into his business from time to time. Serenity had to admit, Pastor Phillip McKnight seemed somewhat different. But there had to be something wrong with him—after all, his ex-wife had left him for some reason, right?

Serenity had finally agreed to do this interview in part because she’d figured it would give her an opportunity to show her viewers how egotistical and pride-filled Pastor McKnight was. This might just be her chance. She leaned closer to Phillip and, in the most innocent voice she could muster, said, “You sound like a reasonable man, Pastor McKnight. One would wonder why your wife divorced you.”

Phillip flinched, then said, “I’ve got an idea. Why don’t you wait for me in the sanctuary? I’ll change my shirt, and then we can give the camera crew a tour of the facility while you interview me about the ministry.”

She didn’t miss his emphasis on “about the ministry,” and she was immediately horrified at what she’d said.

Phillip had changed the subject, and she was more than willing to move away from it, as well. “You keep extra shirts at work?” she asked.

Phillip stood up and pointed at the dirt spots on his shirt. “Never know when I’ll get all grimy changing a tire.”

“My father keeps extra clothes at his church office, too.”

“Smart man,” Phillip said.

She laughed as she stood up. “Okay, I’ll wait for you in the sanctuary.”

Before she could turn away, Phillip said, “You have a beautiful smile, Serenity. You should always keep a smile on your face.”

The compliment made Serenity uncomfortable. She turned and headed out the door as quick as her three-inch heels would carry her.

***

Why did I say that? Phillip wanted to bash himself in the head for speaking like that to a woman who obviously wanted nothing to do with him. Serenity Williams had practically run out of his office, as if he’d told her he had swine flu or something.

Phillip took off his soiled shirt, reached into his closet, and grabbed a blue button-down. As he put it on and then turned to the mirror to examine himself, his thoughts turned back to Serenity. He had been watching her program for more than a month now—not every day, but he made a point to watch whenever he could. Somehow, he’d never imagined that her hazel eyes would sparkle as brightly as they did in person. And that smile of hers almost took his breath away. Actually, Phillip wished it had taken his breath away, for then, he wouldn’t have been able to embarrass himself with stupid talk.

How could he have come on to Serenity like some high school jock with a crush on the prom queen? He lightly slapped his cheeks with his fingertips. “Get yourself together. Go out there and act in a professional manner,” he instructed himself, pointing a finger at his reflection in the mirror.

Phillip left his office, determined to conduct himself in an upright way. Serenity might very well be one of the most beautiful women he’d seen in a long time, but he was a man of God, and he knew how to control himself. “Okay,” Phillip said, clasping his hands together as he stood in the sanctuary, looking from Serenity to the camera crew. “Is everybody ready to get this tour started?”

“We sure are.” Serenity stood up and introduced Phillip to the camera crew, which consisted of two guys. “This is Lenny,” she said as she pointed to a tall, slim Conan O’Brien look-alike. “He’ll be snapping pictures.” She then pointed to a slightly balding African-American man wearing blue jeans and a shirt with palm trees on it. “Bob will be shooting all the footage.”

“Hello, Lenny. Hello, Bob.” Phillip nodded at each man.

“So, where do you want to start?” Serenity asked him.

“Well, you’re already in my pride and joy.” Phillip lifted his arms and did a full circle on the plush carpet of the sanctuary. “This is the first space that was finished, after the office complex. We wanted to be able to have services here, even while the construction crew was pounding their way through the rest of the building.”

Serenity looked from the pulpit to the many pews that lined the first floor and then to the balcony. “This is a beautiful sanctuary. I love the navy and burgundy colors you chose. Very bold, but still warm and inviting.” She turned to Phillip and asked, “How many people can you fit in this sanctuary?”

“It seats about three thousand.”

“For such a young ministry, that is an awful lot of members to have.”

“Oh, we have only about eighteen hundred members, but I believe that we will quickly grow into the place.”

“Sources have said that you put up five million of your own money for this project, but I’m surprised that a bank would loan you the rest of the money you needed without the membership to back it up,” Serenity said.

“I’m still raising capital to finish the building. We’re a work in progress, as you will see.”

“So, the bank wouldn’t loan you the money?”

“We’re in a recession. They loaned me half of what I needed, and I have to come up with the other half.”

“But you’ve already put up so much of your own money. Do you think you’ll get to a point where you’ll say enough is enough?”

Shaking his head, Phillip said, “I would give that and much more to the vision God gave me.” What he didn’t say, though, was that following God’s purpose for his life had already cost him dearly. He had been willing to give the money, but watching his wife walk out the door had been the hardest thing he’d ever done. “Let’s move forward, shall we?”

Phillip led them to the office suite and let them snap pictures of the staff members as they went about their various tasks. Then, he showed them the spaces that would one day be the youth center, additional classrooms, and the fitness room.

“I have never seen a fitness room in a church complex,” Serenity said, signaling Lenny to continue snapping pictures of the equipment.

Phillip picked a fifty-pound weight off the floor and put it back on the rack where it belonged. Although the room was not yet finished, several men in the church had set up the equipment and begun using it, anyway. Guys didn’t need much—just some barbells and a bench press. Ladies, on the other hand, would want to pretty the room up, get rid of the dust and clutter, hang mirrors, and so forth. “I believe in the importance of staying in shape—taking care of God’s temple,” he said.

“I guess you do,” Serenity said with a thoughtful look on her face. Then, she snapped back into professional mode with another question. “So, what does a day in the life of Phillip McKnight look like?”

“I’m not very complex. I get up around six in the morning. I go for a run, then I dig into the Word of God and pray, have a quick breakfast, and come to the church. Once I’m at church, I either plan my sermon or do some other work around here.”

“Speaking of your sermon,” Serenity said, “what time do you want us back here tonight so that Bob can film the message?”

“The service begins at seven, but I normally don’t start preaching until about seven forty-five.”

“Okay,” Serenity said as she held out her hand to shake Phillip’s. “I think we got some good footage today. So, we’ll wrap up for now and finish everything this evening.”

As Phillip took Serenity’s hand in his, he had to remind himself that this was a business meeting and not a first date. He wanted to kiss her hand, but he restrained himself. When he released her hand, he noticed the Gucci watch on her wrist. His ex-wife had liked expensive things, too, and he couldn’t help wondering if Serenity was just like the woman who’d left him and taken half of his hard-earned money with her.

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Publisher’s Note:

This novel is a work of fiction. References to real events, organizations, or places are used in a fictional context. Any resemblances to actual persons, living or dead, are entirely coincidental.


All Scripture quotations are taken from the New King James Version, © 1979, 1980, 1982, 1984 by Thomas Nelson, Inc. Used by permission. All rights reserved.



A Love for Tomorrow
Book Two in the Second Chance at Love Series


Vanessa Miller

www.vanessamiller.com


ISBN: 978-1-60374-208-5

Printed in the United States of America

© 2010 by Vanessa Miller



Whitaker House

1030 Hunt Valley Circle

New Kensington, PA 15068

www.whitakerhouse.com


Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data


Miller, Vanessa.

A love for tomorrow / by Vanessa Miller.

p. cm. — (Second chance at love; bk. 2)

Summary: “Christian television show host Serenity Williams is determined never to fall in love with another ego-driven pastor, but then she meets Pastor Phillip McKnight, whose kingdom vision and humble personality begin to change her mind”—Provided by publisher.

ISBN 978-1-60374-208-5 (trade pbk.)

1. African American churches—Fiction. I. Title.

PS3613.I5623L68 2010

813'.6—dc22
2010017486


No part of this book may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic or mechanical—including photocopying, recording, or by any information storage and retrieval system—without permission in writing from the publisher. Please direct your inquiries to permissionseditor@whitakerhouse.com.


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REVIEW

A Love for Tomorrow is a fun romance between a Tampa football player-turned-pastor and a Chicago Christian talk show evangelist.  Lighthearted and fast-paced, this story is deceptive because it actually deals with some serious subjects, like the fallibility of clergy, stalking, and emotional intimacy, to name a few.


Last year, I enjoyed Ms. Miller's Forsaken enough to add her to my high-alert list, keeping my eye out for new releases and jumping at the chance to read them. This year, I'm no less excited about her work.  Vanessa Miller has an engaging style that puts the reader at ease and enables her to deal with the heavy subjects she tackles without weighing down the story and losing the entertainment value.  A Love for Tomorrow was a delightful read.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, August 28, 2010

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 28, 2010

Not long ago, I was hunting for tidbits from July's Romance Writers of America conference.  Well, did you know there's another RWA, Romance Writers of Australia?  By way of Kitty Bucholtz at Routines for Writers, I found some good posts--much more substantative--about the latter RWA conference which ended a couple of weeks ago.  Paula Roe's roundup summarizes a workshop on Goals, Conflict and Motivation and the Hero's Journey by Deb Dixon and Caitlyn Nicholas offers several posts on her blog summarizing the "A Day", i.e. the Published Author Day, when pubbed authors offer talks on a variety of topics.

And, if you want to know what editors are looking for, I did find this blog post from Chuck over at A Guide to Literary Agents on the agents' Q&A panel during the Orlando conference, including what types of projects they're looking for right now. Agents want what editors want, right?

Pitching from an editor's point of view.  Editor Jevon Bolden talks about what pitching to in Aquisitions meeting is like for her.

This interesting article by Sasah Frere-Jones, recently printed in The New Yorker, talks about changes in the music business that seem to mirror changes in publishing.

I love actress, comedienne and author Betty White. At 88 years old, she just signed a two-book deal with Putnam. Even if she's using a ghostwriter, she's still one funniest ladies alive, and I hope she lives to write another ten books.

What really happened to Barnes & Noble?  A Wall Street analyst's take on their book behemoth's decline.

It's that time of the year again.  Lee & Low is accepting submissions for the New Voices Award, a contest for children's picture books by writers of color.

Author CJ Redwine is in the process of adopting a little girl from China.  I don't know CJ, but I found her story touching.  Read her story, and if you're interested in helping CJ raise the funds needed, support her Skip Starbucks for A Day campaign.  (Do many people still drink Starbucks?  I'm not a coffee drinker, but you don't have to be one to lend your help.)

Recovering from the start of the school year. Weekend sleep becomes very important.

Hope you have a great one, this weekend!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Friday, August 27, 2010

Blog Changes and Awards

I've been thinking about what I want to do with this blog.  I think there are some good things, like the book features, Tuesday Teasers, and the weekend roundup.  But there are also things I'd like to improve upon.  For one thing, I'd really like to go back to doing author interviews.  Haven't done one in a couple of years.  Most of those posted are canned interviews provided during blog tours whereas I started by contacting authors that intrigued me and simply asking to interview them.  No one ever said no.

Another thing I'd like to do is give each day of the week more of a theme so I won't have to think quite as hard about what I'm going to post, and you'll have more of an idea of what to expect.  I'm thinking along these lines:

Motivation Mondays -- Updates on my wip; posts intended to motivate and inspire others to write.  Who doesn't need motivation at the beginning of a new week?

Teaser Tuesdays -- I'll leave this alone.  Folks seem to enjoy the book teasers and these are easy posts to do.

Writerly Wednesdays -- All about the journey.  More on my foray into freelancing, novel writing issues/challenges, etc.  Maybe some short stories.  Could also be author interviews and other writing-related posts.

Theory Thursdays -- Craft posts.  I'd love to have agents, editors, and authors guest blog some of these.  Could be features on craft books.  (I thought about "Technical Thursdays" or "Teachable Thursdays".  "Theory" rhymes best, don't you think?)

Freewheeling Fridays -- Could be anything related to books and writing...or not.

Sharing Saturdays -- My weekly tidbits that I'll continue to share on Saturdays when perhaps folks have a bit more time to plow through all that stuff.

Savior Sundays -- No posts.  On the seventh day, He rested.

Of course, I'll continue my book features.  These could come on any day of the week, supplanting the regular feature for that day. But having this type of schedule gives me a bit of a roadmap.  I hope I don't find it too confining.  It's intended to be a help.

I'll implement these changes over time.  No big "grand re-opening", so to speak.  

Anything you'd like to see here that you haven't (or haven't seen in a while)?


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My blogging friend, Arlene of Adventure Salon, awarded me The Circle of Friends Award because she enjoys my blog.  I'm supposed to pass it on to 5 fabulous blogging friends.  I want to award this to five of the bloggers I've recently come to know about: radio host Susie Davis for her laughter-filled, feel-good blogging;  writer Chris Hamilton of the Florida Writers Association blog for keeping me abreast of the local writing circuit; freelance writer Kelly James-Enger for her great freelancing advice; writer Nicole Petrino-Salter for her honest book reviews and for asking the hard questions; and author James Scott Bell and the rest of the blogging crew over at The Kill Zone for wonderful writing quotes and craft advice.  Can I give to one more, a fairly new addition to the blogosphere?  That would be Dr. Karia Bunting of Forward Focus Ministries for spiritual encouragement and good common sense.

BTW, check out Arlene's blog.  Really.  She blogs about her bucket list.  She's the only person I know who has one and is actually crossing off the items one by one.  Arlene's done everything from hang out behind the scenes with the Los Angeles Lakers to have lunch on the Seine to retire at the age of 50 (so she can do all the other cool things on her list).  She's working on her first novel.  She certainly won't be at a loss for plot ideas!


One last thing...

Not too many commenters for the recent book giveaway, A McKaslin Homecoming. So the three copies go to Deborah M, AusJenny, and Merry. Congratulations!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Writing Rewards

Alicia Rasley blogged about writing rewards and that got me to thinking.  What do I want out of writing?

Thinking about that post led me to this:  It's okay to want what you want.  Be honest, and own it. 

Of course, there are legal, moral and ethical boundaries around this notion, but I find it to be very explosive, empowering idea.

In writing, what works for you may not work for me.  This is why self-publishing works for some writers and not for others.  Some gain validation by going through the submission and acceptance process of finding an agent and a traditional publisher.  Some gain a sense of security.  Others only want their words to be available, and are fine with assuming the costs to make that happen.  Another writer may want control of the process and is willing to take a big(ger) risk in order for bigger financial gain.

Then, too, what you want can change.  You may start out wanting your words to be food for the literary gods, and eventually write for anyone who offers you a paycheck.  You don't have to justify this to anyone but yourself (and maybe your immediate family who could suffer the consequences of your choices).

What do I want?

I want to tell the stories that are bubbling around in my head.  I like the idea, if not the whole process, about creating a complete story from a kernel of an idea.  There's a satisfaction and a joy that result from doing so.

I want to write novels that entertain but also move people to consider something they'd not considered before.  Doesn't have to be rocket science or something deep and ethereal, just a look at a slice of the universe from a different angle you might not have otherwise seen or paid attention to.

I want to publish said novels and earn some money.  Yeah, I said it.  I would love to publish with a traditional publisher, if only for the distribution.  I want to see a book with my name on the cover in a bookstores everywhere.   I'm beginning to think outside that box and consider other options, though.  If I ever self-publish, I'll be sure to approach it very professionally, including a professional edit and cover art design.

I want to be proud of what I produce, and I want my family to be proud of it too.  This one is a bit sticky because it's hard to please a group of people this big.  Just the thought of doing so can be paralyzing (and has been).  For now, I'm concentrating on being proud myself.

I want to develop a significant income from a broad spectrum of freelance opportunities.  For me, this provides balance to the vulnerability and length of time involved in novel writing.  I also like non-fiction writing as much as authoring fiction.  Then, we are increasingly in a world where everyone needs multiple streams of income, at least one of which you control.  Freelancing provides that to some degree.


What do you want from your writing?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Featured Book: The Berenstain Bears and a Job Well Done by Mike Berenstain

I love when I pick books for my children and they get excited by my choices.  Two Berenstain Bears books arrived in the mail, and we couldn't read them fast enough.  The first is featured today, The Berenstain Bears and a Job Well Done.




Today's Wild Card authors are:


and the book:

Zonderkidz (April 9, 2010)
***Special thanks to Krista Ocier of Zondervan for sending me a review copy.***


ABOUT THE AUTHORS:



Stan and Jan Berenstain introduced the first Berenstain Bear books in 1962. Mike Berenstain grew up watching his parents work together to write about and draw these lovable bears. Eventually he started drawing and writing about them too. Though Stan died in 2005, Jan and Mike continue to create the delightful Bear adventures from their family home in Pennsylvania, in an area that looks much like the sunny dirt road deep in Bear Country.


Visit the authors' website.

Product Details:

List Price: $3.99
Reading level: Ages 4-8
Paperback: 32 pages
Publisher: Zonderkidz (April 9, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0310712548
ISBN-13: 978-0310712541

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:



REVIEW

I've always loved the Berenstain Bears books.  Great moral lessons that readers of all ages can enjoy.  Admittedly, with my oldest now a sophomore in high school, it's been a while since I've read a Berenstain Bears book, but this one was different than what I recall.  What made it different was the explicit Scripture reference along with the moral lesson.  I liked that, and my two youngest, who are now old enough to enjoy the Berenstain Bears, did too.

In this book, Brother and Sister Bear are tasked with cleaning their playhouse during the family's spring cleaning.  Unfortunately, they get distracted by a number of other things, and when the day ends, their playhouse is not quite as clean as it could be.  When Papa Bear challenges them, they put their shoulders to the wheel and get the job done.  I have a child who has a tremendous tendency to get distracted when tasked by one of us, but not at all when he's engaged in something he likes and has chosen for himself, like watching the teeth-grinding, very boring (to me) NASA channel or building with Legos.  (Do you see a scientist in the making?)  So, reading this book became a teachable moment, not to mention a fun bedtime read.

The second book, The Berenstain Bears and the Gift of Courage, will be featured next week.  I'll definitely be on the hunt for more of these newer, Christianity-infused Berenstain Bears books.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, August 23, 2010

Bringing Balance To The Writing

So I started my latest 30-day challenge, both for writing and exercise, last Monday.  My biggest challenges have come in the way of time to write and the time that I write/exercise.

I added nearly 7,000 words to my wip last week, averaging 996 words per day.  I wrote as little as 483 words and as many as 1,596 in a single session.  Felt great!  But I struggled and began to stress over not having enough time to write.  The issue I'm struggling with is balancing my nonfiction freelancing with my novel writing.  There are only so many hours in the day, and try as I might, there don't seem to be enough hours for me to do both.

This is definitely a bit of a pickle, as the freelancing brings in income.  Novel writing is a longer-term venture. I find that I enjoy both and the two types of writing provide a perfect ying-yang scenario.  When one is stuck, the other seems to easily glide forward.  Now, I'm trying to move them both at the same time, and it's not quite working out.

I finally decided to release myself from trying to freelance during the workweek, focusing solely on the wip.  Making this decision did wonders for my stress level.  In return, I knew I'd have to commit serious time to freelancing over the weekend, and still put in a little time into the novel each day.  I did this successfully on Saturday and Sunday, allowing me to wake up this morning pretty energized, but I'd like to find a way to put some time into freelancing Monday thru Friday, even with school starting tomorrow.  This may ultimately be unrealistic, but I haven't conceded that point as yet.  (I can be a little stubborn when I think it's simply a matter of creativity and better planning.)

As far as the exercise, I'm keeping up with that too.  So I'm 7 for 7 right now, having both written and exercised for 7 straight days.

The other challenge I mentioned, time that I write/exercise?  Well, I have no idea what time my husband goes to sleep, nor does he know what I'm doing, because I found myself rarely getting to my exercise before 10:30, and then I write after that.  By the time I shower and get to bed, it's...  Well, let's just say it's some ungodly hour that not even I want to know--and I'm great at avoiding clocks just for this reason--cutting my much needed sleep short.

So I have to figure out how to get in my exercise and my novel writing time so that I can reasonably go to bed before midnight (that time seems fair) while also trying to get in a little freelance work.

There are just not enough hours in the day!

As an aside, my friend Patti Lacy announced a new book deal last week for her latest novel, Reclaiming Lily, the story about a woman from the U.S. and one from China, and the teenager who unites them.

How's your writing going?  If you're with me in the challenge, how did you do? 

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, August 21, 2010

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 21, 2010

I'm going to try to keep these shorter than they've been of late. I really want you to scroll through, find something of interest, and take away new information in at least one writing-related area, though.

Heard of Smashwords? I had, but I didn't fully understand it until I read this interview with Smashwords founder Mark Coker. Another intriguing publishing platform...

Literary agent Donald Maass has been blogging for one year.  To celebrate, he has compiled all the questions asked and answers he's provided into a downloadable pdf for easy reference.

Editors Alicia Rasley and Theresa Stevens will offer a two-week online intensive called "Fiction Structure" beginning September 1st.

An $89 e-reader?  Try Augen The Book.

Writers often want to know what it takes to go full-time.  Agent Chip MacGregor gives some of the best advice, imho, so consider what Chip says about making a living writing and when you're ready to go full-time.

At any point in your writing career, you may find yourself in search of an agent.  Agent Rachelle Gardner tells us "What to Ask An Agent".

RITA and Nora Roberts Lifetime Achievement award winning author Jennifer Greene talks about "Voice vs. Style".

Saw this one on FB (thanks, LaShaunda!).  Best Places to Get Free Books

Authors sometimes choose to hide behind a penname...or not.  The Washington Post looks at "Is the Pen Name Mightier Than the Sword, or Just a Modern Writer's Flimsy Foil?"

Doe Branch Ink, Inc. is offering facilitated writing retreats for up to 10 participants at a time this fall and next spring.   The retreats include time for individual writing, interaction with the writer-in-residence, evening readings and optional recreational activities.

E-reader prices are dropping.  One analyst predicts Amazon's Kindles may fall to $99 in time for the holidays;  upstart Cobia already announced a $99 e-reader to launch this fall.

So much for shorter.  I'll try harder next time.

Enjoy the weekend!

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Friday, August 20, 2010

Fear Of The Status Quo, Empowered to Change

I was reading an interview with author Lisa Samson on the RT Book Reviews blog on the power fear.  Lisa's recent title is Resurrection In May, about an American woman who remains behind in the 1994 Rwanda during that country's mass genocide.  (BTW, if you've never read Lisa Samson, you are really missing something special.  Pick up any one of her books, doesn't matter which, and you'll be in for a treat!)

In the interview, Lisa paraphrases something that was told to her once:  "...we'll move forward into something we have feared when we become more frightened of the status quo."

What a profound statement, and one that holds all too true for me when I reflect on my life.

Fear can be paralyzing but it can also be motivating.  My 30-day challenges are based in part on fear.  Fear that ten years from now I'll weigh as much as I do today, or more, and I'll be sickly and miserable.  Fear of developing full-blown diabetes.  Fear of not being around to watch my sons grow up into fine men.  Fear of waking up when I turn 50, some ten years after I began writing, and having little or nothing to show for it, having not finished my manuscripts, not submitted them, not published them.  Fear of meeting Christ after spending my whole life saying I was a Christian and knowing little more about Him than His name.  (That last  is behind my upcoming 30-day Bible study challenge.)

I could give a million reasons detailing all the little things that have gotten in my way up to now, and just keep adding to it until someone closes a casket over my head.

I choose not to go out that way.  Instead, in part motivated by fear but even more so by empowering myself to reach for the life I dream of, I'm taking action.  Are the 30-day challenges kind of gimicky?  You bet.  But so what?  If they work for me, which they do, then they're a productive means to a constructive end. I feel empowered and I'm moving forward toward my goals.

What is your status quo?  What have you been saying you want to change or do differently, yet you haven't gotten around to it?  What have you been working on for a long time but not making any real progress?

Pick one thing that you absolutely can't stand anymore.  The thought of where you are vs. where you want to be simply makes you sick.  Are you willing to shake up your personal status quo to move forward?  The 30-day challenge, doing something to move toward your goal every day for 30 straight days, might not work for you, but there's a process out there that will.  Find it and use it.  Do you need help to move forward?  Find someone who cares about you and only wishes you good, and ask for help, whether it be technical assistance or simply loving support.


Don't accept the status quo if it's not where you want to be when you find eternal rest.  Because you don't know how long you have and I truly believe we're intended to live life to the fullest.

Forget those things that have held you back or kept you down, and take one step forward.  Just one.  I promise each subsequent step gets easier and easier.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Thursday, August 19, 2010

Freelancing: Pay-per-click Sites

Recently I talked about writing for content factories, like Demand Media Studios or Associated Content.  Today I'd like to visit another freelancing opportunity that has grown in popularity in recent years, pay-per-click sites.

With pay-per-click sites, the writer may submit articles for editorial review and publication or have a column on a third-party site.  Or, they may get paid for writing articles on their own blog about a particular topic.

Examiner.com is one of the widely known pay-per-click sites.  Writers select a topic niche, at either a regional or national level, and post articles on that subject.  They receive compensation based on the number of readers who access their articles, a penny for each click.  Thus, the more readers, the more money.  Writers therefore are expected to market and promote their columns in order to build a readership.

Writers who are particularly success at the regional level, or who come with a significant built in audience, may be asked to write on the national level.  National columnists are featured, thereby increasing their clicks, in a way that regional columnists are not.

Columns may be as short or long as the writer deems appropriate for the subject matter, but writers are encouraged to write in an authoritative manner.  This is not blogging, so the more casual tone typically found in blogs is not appropriate.

I wrote for Examiner beginning in April 2009 and posted my last column in December of that year.  Why?  Because the columns took more time and effort than I was willing to invest given the low level of pay.  A penny per click.  One penny, and you have to have at least $25 in clicks per month (2500 clicks) in order to get paid.  Now, 2500 doesn't seem like a whole lot, that is, until you find yourself missing the mark time after time.

Again, this is not supposed to be blogging, so columnists should write well-researched articles.  I didn't have a built-in audience, and even putting links to my columns on my blog and tweeting about them didn't generate a whole lot of traffic.  It became very disheartening for the limited amount of writing time I have available to me.

There is one other way that you get paid via Examiner.  If someone else joins and uses your name as a referral, you can earn a one-time fee of as much as $50 per referral.  I have one friend who made the majority of her money this way.   (If anyone decides to look into this, feel free to use me as your referral.)

There are other types of pay-per-click sites, like Social Spark, where writers are paid to place ads or write blogs on specific products.  Another way is to draw readers to your own blog, where you already have a topic of interest, using a tool like Google AdSense.  In that case, you will need your readers to click the links for the related ads in order for you to be compensated.  (I almost never click an ad on a blog.  Do you?)

Then, you could freelance for a marketing company that writes pay-per-click ads placed on third-party sites, for which you'll be compensated based on the number of clicks.   This type of writing is actually fairly specialized and may require some training.  In this case, you don't have to build the readership.  You simply write the ad.  But ultimately, someone somewhere has to build a following that will see the column or blog post or ad you write

Many of the pay-per-click writing sites now incorporate Twitter and other social networking posts automatically.  Writing for one of these sites could work in reverse and lead hundreds of people to you--your blog, your books, etc.

Writing for Examiner wasn't for me, but I know others who do so and seem to be doing well with it.  If you have a carefully chosen area of interest that you can mine, establishing yourself as an expert, then follow-up by working hard to build a readership, a market like this can be a good thing.  Writers get a byline.  There are no deadlines other than the ones you set for yourself.  No one is editing your articles other than the first one submitted.  You have a lot of freedom and leeway to shape your column and make it your own.

There are articles and forum posts out there that will scare you away from this type of writing, saying that no one ever makes money.  Not true.  As with any opportunity, it comes down to assessing what type of writing you wish to do, what type of platform you're trying to build and what you're willing and able to do to build it.  It also comes down to how you value your time--a cost-benefits analysis that is specific to you--and making the right decision for you.  This writing journey is very personal, with as many paths as there are writers.

Have you written for any pay-per-click sites?  What have you done to insure sufficient earnings?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, August 18, 2010

The Challenges in the 30-Day Writing Challenge

Monday, the first night of my latest 30-day challenge, I was exhilarated.  After dinner, I relaxed with the family, then worked out.  Following my exercise, I showered and sat down to write. 

I fudged around a bit with NetGalley, trying to download my choices to my Kindle for PC app. Finally, I gave in and downloaded them to Adobe Digital Editions (which I'm not fond of). Something I needed to do, but definitely a distraction.  Then, I opened my wip and read the last few sentences to refresh my memory.  It was 11:30, and I had no idea where I wanted to go with the story.

I resisted the temptation to read from the beginning, which would have resulted in me doing revisions, not writing.  This challenge is about forward movement.

I actually had plot notes, but I'd left off in the middle of a scene so I just plunged in and finished that scene. 
After about an hour, I shut the PC down and went to bed.  It was after midnight, but I felt good.

Until Tuesday morning.  The alarm sounded at 6:00, this after I'd gotten up to use the bathroom at 4:30.  Getting up was the last thing I wanted to do.

I immediately determined that I needed to refine my plan.

Writing during my lunch break was not an option.  I needed to run an errand and race back to make a meeting.

Writing during work is not an option.  I'm way too busy.  Besides, in general, I don't work on my novels at work, as a rule.

I figured I have about a four hour window between getting home in the evenings and bedtime.  In that time, I need to cook dinner, if Hubby was too busy to start the meal.  Serve the meal.  Spend some time with the boys.  Unwind.  Get them off to bed.  Exercise.  Shower.  Unwind again, and write.  Seems like more than enough time, but it's not really, not if I want to get to bed by 11:00, which I absolutely need to do, what with the start of school pushing my wake-up time up two hours earlier.

So I cut my "unwind" time short.  I didn't watch the Shaq Vs. show with my son.  Instead, I laced up the sneaks and headed downstairs to workout.  I was pleased as punch that I finished my workout before 10pm (and I was able to see the final relay race between the Tyson Gay team and the Shaq team).  I could shower and still get in a half hour of writing before bedtime.

Then, Hubby and I got wrapped up in another project.  By the time I finally turned out the lights, it was 1 AM.  No wonder I was late getting up this morning!

I'm definitely heading in the wrong direction.  But I both exercised and wrote.  Yay!


Tonight will be the real test.  No margin for error with waking up tomorrow if Oldest One is to get to school on time tomorrow.  I'm going to have to borrow from Nike and "just do it".  No distractions or side projects. 

Send some positive thoughts my way this evening 'round about 9 until 11.  I could use them.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Teaser Tuesdays: A McKaslin Homecoming (And A Giveaway!)

"No wonder she was so independent, he realized.  She'd never had anyone she could count on.  He couldn't explain why he wanted to be the one she could." -- page 144, A McKaslin Homecoming by Jillian Hart

Jillian Hart has been churning out heartwarming stories about the McKaslin clan since 2002.  The McKaslin Homecoming was released in 2007.  Since then, Ms. Hart has continued to write contemporary but also historical romances about this family.

I'm a member of a Harlequin Reader panel.  Mostly they send me surveys on things like book covers, themes, etc., but occasionally they send free books, either to review or just to have.  Well, this time, they sent me five copies of A McKaslin Homecoming.  I'm reading one but I'm happy to offer the other copies to four lucky commenters.  Leave a comment about your favorite McKaslin story, if you're a Jillian Hart fan, or your most memorable family reunion.  I'll pick four winners next Monday, August 23rd.

Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along! Just do the following:
  • Grab your current read
  • Open to a random page
  • Share two (2) “teaser” sentences from somewhere on that page (in the comments or via link to your own blog)
  • BE CAREFUL NOT TO INCLUDE SPOILERS! (make sure that what you share doesn’t give too much away! You don’t want to ruin the book for others!)
  • Share the title and author, too, so that other TT participants can add the book to their TBR Lists if they like your teasers!

Reading anything interesting?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Monday, August 16, 2010

Challenging Self: 30 Days of Writing

This was supposed to be my back-from-conference post.

But I didn't make it to conference. 

So what do I have to talk about?

Books.  I keep reading really good ones, like How Clarissa Burden Learned to Fly by Connie May Fowler  (click on link for a review) and A Love for Tomorrow by Vanessa Miller, my current read.

Writing.  Still pounding out articles for DemandStudios.  Just sold a short prayer to Prayables.  Submitted my first national magazine query and wrapping my head around another one.  Learning loads about freelancing, tons of stuff to share.  Itching to spend some time with my novel wip, but haven't quite been able to make that happen. 

And that's the keyword, "make".  Writing doesn't suddenly or magically occur, like snow flurries when the forecaster predicted clear skies.  It requires concerted effort.  A plan.  And that's probably what I've lacked most these past few years.

My 30-day exercise challenges have helped me in this regard.  When on a challenge, I have to find ways to fit the exercise in or I fail.  Plain and simple.  I don't like failure and I get pumped when, with a little bit of forethought, I'm able to juggle my exercise along with everything else in my life.

I have to do the same for my writing.  I've known this, but it became so crystal clear during my exercise challenge.

So beginning today, I'm challenging myself to work on my wip every day for the next month.  This is in addition to whatever freelance work I do.  No word count or time targets.  Simply, write.  Every day.  For 30 days.  That's my goal.

Might only get one sentence out, but that's highly unlikely.  You writers know what happens when you actually sit down to write.  Most of the time, anyway.

School starts tomorrow for my oldest, next week for the two youngest, including my kindergartener.  Hubby's birthday is in a couple of weeks and so is our anniversary.  There's the Labor Day holiday.  We hope to move sometime in the next month.  And work won't let up before the beginning of October.  So there's plenty going on, plenty to get in my way.  I see the challenges.  Now I just need a plan to work around them, much as I've done with my exercise.

BTW, my last 30-day exercise challenge bombed about 21 days in due to that last GA roadtrip.  I exercised in GA and was sooooo proud of myself, but haven't moved much since.  One gym workout, one pool workout.  So I'm starting a new 30-day exercise challenge today too.  Should be interesting.

What do you do to push yourself to meet your goals?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Saturday, August 14, 2010

Reader/Writer Tidbits -- August 14, 2010

Dorchester Publishing drops mass market paperbacks in favor of ebooks.  Strategic move?  Perhaps, but seems the president and editorial director are not quite speaking from the same page.  And rumblings suggest problems with advances and royalties.  Authors, pay attention.

Building upon our recent discussion about Christian publishing, I invite you to check out Nicole Petrino-Salter's blog, Into the Fire.  This blogger has a current series about what should change in Christian publishing with authors, editors, and agents voicing their opinions, both anonymously and openly.  It starts here, with her own comments, but you'll find all of the posts in the series illuminating.

Authors are always looking for ways to promote.  If you are, make sure you check out "How to Be a Multi-Media Author and Stand Out From the Crowd".  'Course if everyone in the crowd starts doing these things, you'll still be in the crowd, but until then...

A great way for writers to get information about setting is to look at local newspapers.  50States.com offers links to over 3,300 newspapers throughout America, organized by state.

Does it sometimes seem as though the writing world has gone hyphen-mad? When to hyphen and when not, from Grammarphobia.

Award-winning novelist Robert Sawyer's take on what all the new ways for a novelist to earn money really amount to.  Puts some perspective on what authors are up against, and on how as a society--a globe?--expectations of something for nothing are increasing.

From Larry Brooks at Storyfix, "13 Writing Cliches That Will Kick Your..."   You know the rest so I don't have to type that word here.  I can't very well tell my children not to say it, under any circumstances, and then put it on my blog.  Sorry.  But I like the article.

Are you a procrastinating writer?  Are you stressed about it?  Joanne Elliot offers a few coping strategies to break the procrastination-stress cycle.

11 Plot Pitfalls - And How to Rescue Your Story From Them.

Do your secondary characters add texture or fall flat? Author Rachel Hauck gives tips for sprucing up your secondary characters.

Seekerville educates us on the role of the book distributor in publishing.

Enjoy the weekend! Next week brings the official "back-to-school" for our household. A yay!...and a sigh.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Friday, August 13, 2010

Featured Book: The Mailbox by MaryBeth Whalen

Where Lost Love Meets Second Chances
Can a simple mailbox reunite two wounded souls?

526 bk cover_WhalenA rural mailbox stands alone on an isolated North Carolina beach, and within its unobtrusive confines lay the hopes and dreams, the heartaches and joys of countless strangers. Tending the lone mailbox on this deserted beach is an anonymous reader called the Kindred Spirit…drawing hearts toward healing and hope. Marybeth Whalen’s debut novel, The Mailbox, is set around this real-life landmark. She explores the possibility that this isolated and mysterious message center can reunite two people who have been separated by a lifetime of regret and confusion. Because of the mailbox, second chances arise in the face of painful loss, and the promise that enduring love and faith can overcome the destruction of long-kept secrets rings true.

Lindsey Adams begins her visits to the Kindred Spirit mailbox as a young teen. There, she finds her first love, Campbell Forrester. But twenty years later, she returns to the beach as a woman whose husband, Grant, has divorced her after a string of infidelities. Remembering her first love, and wondering whatever became of Campbell, Lindsey allows the salty beach air to reengage her sense of hope. She begins to imagine that Campbell might not be long lost after all.

Meanwhile, Campbell faces his own hardships—including his broken relationship with his daughter and his longing to undo his inadequacies as a father. When Campbell learns that Lindsey has returned to the beach, he cannot help but feel hopeful that he may discover love again.

Whalen’s heartfelt and freshly evoked story explores how memories—and good-old-fashioned, hand-written letters—can not only haunt us, but also can heal us. She explores the memories of first romance while also taking a look at painful life circumstances. Marriage, parenting, and personal integrity are brought into focus in this edgy romance, as is the struggle to come to terms with God’s love for us and His plan for our lives. Using letters from the Kindred Spirit mailbox, Whalen delves into the hearts of two people who truly desire to experience the transformation of enduring love.

The Mailbox
by Marybeth Whalen
David C Cook/June 1, 2010
ISBN 978-0-7814-0369-6/384 pages/softcover/$14.99

REVIEW 

Even after reading the blurb and hearing so much buzz about this title, I still wasn't sure what to expect from The Mailbox.  But I'm glad I read it.

Set against a backdrop of North Carolina's Sunset Beach, Whalen tells a loving story about two people who meet and fall in love as teens but decisions and circumstances take them in separate directions, only to be brought back together years later.  First love, forever love.  That's what The Mailbox is all about.

Whalen's pacing and prose roll gently to and fro like the waves of the ocean, reeling in the reader's hopes and expectations for Lindsay and Campbell, only to snatch them back each and every time.  One begins to wonder whether this will be a romance, which guarantees a happy ending, or a bittersweet tale.  Thankfully, the romance wins out.

The Mailbox is more than another story about romantic love.  It's also a tale about familial love, as both Lindsay and Campbell struggle with doing what's right by members of their families.  They find themselves faced with having to choose between being selfless and selfish, as we all do, and wondering when or if it's ever okay to choose the latter.

I love books that juxtaposition the real world with the fictional story.  Like historical novels that incorporate true events.  Sure, Sunset Beach is real, but more importantly, the Kindred Spirit mailbox that is the centerpiece of this story is also real.  The area's activity page invites visitors to drop a letter in the box when visiting the Bird Island Coastal Reserve.   This type of thing only serves to endear the reader to the story even more.  I found myself wondering what the mailbox looked like, and whether, if I were ever in North Carolina, I might be able to find it.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Freelancing: Getting Started

I'm off to Philadelphia for the Greater Philadelphia Christian Writers Conference. I'll be back next week. I've got a few posts written for while I'm away and I'll try to check in, but I'm not sure how much time I'll have. Hope your writing days are productive ones. See you soon.

UPDATE:  No, I'm not in Philadelphia.  Circumstances beyond my control.  Life happens.  So I'm here...and blogging.   

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In recent months, I've shifted my focus to freelance writing. Freelancing simply means I don't have a contract tying me to any particular market or publisher. I am free to sell my writing wherever I choose.

I talked about writing for a content factory, but that's just one option. Little did I know back in 2006 when I was writing and selling stories to the "Trues", i.e. the confessions market a la True Romance, True Confessions, True Story, and True Experience, that I was freelancing. I didn't think about putting a label on what I was doing. I simply wanted to write stories to earn experience and a little cash.

The Trues remain a viable option for a wide range of stories, from romantic to you-would-never-believe-what-happened-to-me to drama-filled stories. They pay $0.03 per word, on average.

There are many other ways to freelance, though. They include writing magazines, trade journals, ezines, and newspapers, copyediting, offering editorial services, proofreading, ghostwriting, blogging, and more.

With the myriad of available opportunities, where does one begin?

Your first step is to define your objectives. What do you want out of freelancing? Is it to build a varied writing resume? To establish yourself as an expert in a particular area, to build a platform for book-length work or speaking engagements? To offer balance and contrast to writing novels or non-fiction book length projects? To fill time? To earn money?

Pretty much everyone freelancing wants to earn money. How much do you want to earn and over what period of time? Do you want or need cash right away, or are you willing to wait longer periods for possibly higher sums? Do you have a sense of what your time is worth? How long does it take you to write and polish 500, 1,000 or 10,000 words, i.e what is the value of each word to you? Might there be opportunities that it is not worth it for you to pursue?

Once you have a high-level sense of your goals, you then should assess your strengths to determine what types of freelancing might be a fit for you. If you can whip up short pieces in a flash, perhaps you begin by writing for the confessions mags, other publications seeking short fictional works, magazine fillers, or for a local business's website.

If you enjoy researching and writing about a variety of topics, perhaps you begin by writing for the a content factory or general-interest ezines.

If you have a niche of expertise and want to capitalize on that, writing for magazines, newspapers, trade journals, targeted websites or blogs might be the way to go.

If you've got editorial experience and you enjoy helping others to shape their worlds into readability, then editorial services, copywriting or proofreading might be for you.

If you've got publishing experience and you are able to capture someone else's voice, ghostwriting might be for you.

I'd advise against trying to do all these things at one time. As with any writing endeavor, freelancing takes concerted effort. Some endeavors require less time but may offer lower pay. Some may require a longer time to publication but higher financial rewards. Others, like ghostwriting, may be harder nuts to crack, requiring a solid resume of writing credits.

If you select an initial freelancing arena to pursue, you can then research that area more thoroughly, craft a more detailed plan, and focus your writing efforts for success.

Freelancing begins with knowing what you want and who you are as a writer.

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Teaser Tuesdays: How Clarissa Burden Learned to Fly

"But she couldn't stop herself.  Her entire future, in that one convulsive moment, seemed to depend on her asking what she had barely been able to ponder privately.  She did not allow herself even a second or two of self-reflection so that she might consider whether blind rage or a reasonable need for truth propelled her forward.  Clarissa Burden had come unhinged." -- page 242, How Clarissa Burden Learned to Fly by Connie May Fowler

Women's fiction at its finest is how I'd describe this tale of a woman in FL dealing with a self-absorbed, passively abusive husband, ghosts and a big snake.  If you love language, love hearing just the right words wrapped around the right thoughts, you will enjoy reading this one just for the words.  Words like "contemptible", "windward", "inflame", "otherness", "pendulous"...  And the story doesn't bog down for all the beautiful words but rather moves steadily along, keeping the reader turning the pages.

Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along! Just do the following:
  • Grab your current read
  • Open to a random page
  • Share two (2) “teaser” sentences from somewhere on that page (in the comments or via link to your own blog)
  • BE CAREFUL NOT TO INCLUDE SPOILERS! (make sure that what you share doesn’t give too much away! You don’t want to ruin the book for others!)
  • Share the title and author, too, so that other TT participants can add the book to their TBR Lists if they like your teasers!

Reading anything interesting?

Peace & Blessings,
Patricia

Stay focused. Be deliberate. Believe.